God's Shadow-For Contest

GOD’S SHADOW/for contest


There were prayers – hollow, empty – prayers.
Oh, the hands were folded, heads bowed,
voices muffled in saint-like submission,
reverberating the words – following
as children do - just a little behind.

Prayers of supplication, beseeching forgiveness
for the unimaginable sin of being born – in sin.
Humble prayers of thanks that “we” were not like “them”,
that “we” would be saved by this God of unconditional
and unreciprocated love.

We prayed “in the shadow of the church”, literally
its twin spires towering above us, we prayed in
the “belly of the beast” – bright, shiny, gold, frankincense,
and murmurs of a past.  Silenced before the idled saints
frozen in eternal heavenward gestures.

I hid the child, protected him, allowed him time
to find peace with himself, to learn to trust
in the beauty of a flower, touch the truth in
solemn strength of twisted Elm, hear the
near soundless song of the flowing river.

Upon awakening, we joined souls and prayed.
Giving thanks for the strength that held us as one,
the tenacity to continue to live, courage to know
there is a “god” and we are one. 
I am the shadow of that “god”.


John G. Lawless
5/18/2015

submitted to – Prayertime Memories – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Isaiah Zerbst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/19/2015 8:40:00 PM
John so beautiful it is breathtaking 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today
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John Lawless
Date: 5/21/2015 7:53:00 AM
Thank you for the kind comment and the high mark. I try to peruse the newly posted poems every day and follow up on those I have come to look forward to reading.
Date: 5/19/2015 9:40:00 AM
Great write! I must agree with comment below. The last line is beautiful.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/21/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Anna I appreciate the interest.
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