God's Kind of Poetry

God finds His rhyme in echoes of dolphin’s cries His meter is reflected in the change of seasons He looks upon us would-be wordsmiths with a smile perhaps even a chuckle stumblers through glory created by His hand no image we create with a pen can match the weave of His design we describe trees personify them and give them voices fill them with nests of blue robins’ eggs wail as they shed their splendor each fall far more beauty is found by listening God’s heaven-sent breeze filters through branches dropping acorns on the earth below we forage for words deep into late-night attacks of creativity indoors, in man-made structures while God’s poetry remains outside perhaps, by hand, He will guide us allow us to soar above deep seas grant us entry to volcanoes’ depths view plants and animals He has created below only then will we know God’s kind of poetry
*Written September 28, 2014
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Marcum Wong Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this beauty Carolyn. I knew I would see this one at the top!
Nance Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 2:40 PM
I love your descriptions, wonderful job on a wonderful win!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 11:06 PM
Amazing write dear Carolyn,truly God's kind of poetry, heavenly words, last two stanzas just awesome, congrats on ur first place win my friend!
Jamoner Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Congratz on your win! Such a nice poem!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations on your great win with this amazing poem Carolyn. Absolutely stunning.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 9:19 PM
This is beautiful and I enjoyed it tremendously. Congratulations and God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Oh so lovely Carolyn glad to see you here more often majestic first 2 lines WOW Congrad's Light & Love
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations dear Carolyn! A truly deserved top placing in this contest with an excellent and inspired write. Free verse can be so expressive when tackled with energy and love. This must go to my faves. Well done. hugs // paul
Yvonne Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:35 PM
A stunning write!
Yvonne Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Congratulations on your huge win.
Johnson Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Another wonderful first place winner. You all wrote as if it were God writing. Funny thing I thought he was asking for a poem worthy of God's ears not his pen. Thus my feeble attempt. Glad you're writing again. Congratulations. love, Joyce
Kayode Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 7:59 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 6:04 AM
I am impressed by your composition, Carolyn, congrats on the win
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 4:13 AM
this is so beautiful Carolyn many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
October 16, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Beautiful Carolyn, congratulations on your number one finish!
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:58 AM
- What a beautiful poem!!! - Thank you, Carolyn ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Oh Carolyn this is so lovely dear! N granting entry into volcanos' depth I wud really wish! His amazing ways we cannot explore all! Best wishes!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 2:59 AM
This is lovely Carolyn. I couldn't agree more. Nature is where God resides, there and inside of us. Beautiful!
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