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God's Kind of Poetry

God finds His rhyme in echoes of dolphin’s cries His meter is reflected in the change of seasons He looks upon us would-be wordsmiths with a smile perhaps even a chuckle stumblers through glory created by His hand no image we create with a pen can match the weave of His design we describe trees personify them and give them voices fill them with nests of blue robins’ eggs wail as they shed their splendor each fall far more beauty is found by listening God’s heaven-sent breeze filters through branches dropping acorns on the earth below we forage for words deep into late-night attacks of creativity indoors, in man-made structures while God’s poetry remains outside perhaps, by hand, He will guide us allow us to soar above deep seas grant us entry to volcanoes’ depths view plants and animals He has created below only then will we know God’s kind of poetry
*Written September 28, 2014

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Date: 10/23/2014 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win with this beauty Carolyn. I knew I would see this one at the top!
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:40:00 PM
I love your descriptions, wonderful job on a wonderful win!
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Date: 10/17/2014 11:06:00 PM
Amazing write dear Carolyn,truly God's kind of poetry, heavenly words, last two stanzas just awesome, congrats on ur first place win my friend!
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:46:00 PM
Congratz on your win! Such a nice poem!
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win with this amazing poem Carolyn. Absolutely stunning.
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:19:00 PM
This is beautiful and I enjoyed it tremendously. Congratulations and God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:21:00 PM
Oh so lovely Carolyn glad to see you here more often majestic first 2 lines WOW Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations dear Carolyn! A truly deserved top placing in this contest with an excellent and inspired write. Free verse can be so expressive when tackled with energy and love. This must go to my faves. Well done. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:35:00 PM
A stunning write!
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your huge win.
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:26:00 AM
Another wonderful first place winner. You all wrote as if it were God writing. Funny thing I thought he was asking for a poem worthy of God's ears not his pen. Thus my feeble attempt. Glad you're writing again. Congratulations. love, Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:59:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:04:00 AM
I am impressed by your composition, Carolyn, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:13:00 AM
this is so beautiful Carolyn many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:57:00 AM
Beautiful Carolyn, congratulations on your number one finish!
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Date: 9/28/2014 8:58:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem!!! - Thank you, Carolyn ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 4:56:00 AM
Oh Carolyn this is so lovely dear! N granting entry into volcanos' depth I wud really wish! His amazing ways we cannot explore all! Best wishes!
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:59:00 AM
This is lovely Carolyn. I couldn't agree more. Nature is where God resides, there and inside of us. Beautiful!
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