Goddess Spring

With gladness I am drawn to a rosy dawn and looking up to where white clouds are swirled in heaven’s skies, I see before my eyes the goddess of a blossoming new world. As mountain streams come flowing, wind is blowing her shining hair. Enchantress of the wild, she twirls a gown of green round hills and meadows. How beautiful is she, this woman-child! When she disrobes to shower, fruit trees flower. She blows a kiss, and birds begin to sing. On whispering breeze, she sways and warms the days. New life smells sweet. We greet the Goddess Spring. Feb. 23, 2023 for Joseph May's "In Bloom" Poetry Contest Entered now for 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE NO 1198' Poetry Contest
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Date: 3/10/2023 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. I love these lines, especially: "How beautiful is she, this woman-child." "When she disrobes to shower, fruit trees flower." Exquisite. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2023 2:35:00 PM
Love your enchantress of the wild. Sweet Goddess of Spring. A beautiful write. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2023 12:24:00 PM
Oh boy, I thought I had commented on this oh so original poem Andrea. Well, I'm back to say congratulations on your well deserved win. Blessings!
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Date: 3/7/2023 11:41:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win in my contest
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Date: 3/7/2023 8:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 3/6/2023 6:13:00 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
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Date: 3/6/2023 4:40:00 PM
and ode to the goddess....wonderfully done Andrea i shall remember this goddess when i uncover my kayak.
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Date: 3/6/2023 3:25:00 PM
The woman-child goddess came through here last week Andrea, and my fruit trees are blooming. So nice to see these early signs of Spring and so nice to read your poem. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/25/2023 2:33:00 PM
I like the way rhymes (internal) 'trip-over' one another. Not easy to produce but very satisfying if successful. If you follow the adage: "Write 'till lightning strikes", for this, it is apropos. ;)
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Date: 2/24/2023 8:31:00 PM
This is simply amazing, Andrea, love your use of internal rhyme:)
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Date: 2/24/2023 12:51:00 AM
She can't come quick enough, already signs here of its welcome approach. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2023 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem Andrea but spring is too far away here.
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Date: 2/23/2023 1:31:00 PM
That was beautiful Andrea. I could feel the warm breezes as I read this. I love the rhythm of this poem, it floats effortlessly on the page. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 2/23/2023 12:53:00 PM
Wow this is brilliant Andrea! I absolutely love it :-) A big fave for me and a first place winner in my books :-)
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Date: 2/23/2023 11:00:00 AM
a write as lovely as spring...I love this time of the year even though my eyes tear up more than usual :)
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Date: 2/23/2023 9:46:00 AM
When she disrobes to shower, fruit trees flower. She blows a kiss, and birds begin to sing.--so well said, Andrea. A winning poem you wrote.
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Date: 2/23/2023 7:19:00 AM
You always do nature poems brilliantly, Andrea. A pleasure to read you this morning. I hope all is well with you and yours.
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