Ken Carroll Poet Free verse

Goddess

Visions of you
my soul
swim to me
the water is plentiful
in my love for you.

When in the stream
clutch your flowers
to your tender breasts
naked and dripping with water
as moonlight makes them bloom.

I love your flowers
for they are beautiful
the way you show them
swimming in the water
soon to take my hand...
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Lucilla Carrillo March 8, 2014 at 11:38 AM Hi Ken; As always you have created a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Ken Carroll March 8, 2014 at 11:42 AM Gracias por leer Lucilla!

Skat A March 5, 2014 at 9:44 PM Ken, beautiful poem. When it streams, it blooms. One of the best I read on this day. ~SKAT Ken Carroll March 5, 2014 at 9:53 PM Thanks for visiting Skat!

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2014 at 9:01 AM i swoon over this dreamy piece, ken... simply enticing.. huggs Ken Carroll March 4, 2014 at 11:01 AM Thank you Nette!

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2014 at 6:42 PM this is a beautiful portrayal of your goddess. Romantic and sweet. What more to ask!! Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 6:58 PM Thank you Andrea!

Carrie Richards March 3, 2014 at 3:15 PM Love is not easy to make original........ You did in this lovely poem!! Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 4:36 PM Thank you Carrie...

Sara Kendrick March 3, 2014 at 2:14 PM Passionate work...I hope that the lady in your life enjoys reading this work..Thanks for stopping by..I am still working on "Unanchored Boat"..Sara Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 2:16 PM Thanks for the visit Sara..

Robert Pettit March 3, 2014 at 1:59 PM I agree with what the three ladies below have stated. This is a very good romantic write. Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 2:02 PM Thank you Robert..

Amy Green March 3, 2014 at 1:15 PM Wow.. this can be interpreted in many different ways, beautifully penned and exceptionally visioned Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 1:24 PM Thank you for visiting Amy..

Eileen Manassian March 3, 2014 at 12:13 PM Another beauty from you, Ken. The moonlight makes the flowers bloom...Magical Ken Carroll March 3, 2014 at 12:21 PM Thank you Eileen..Your visits are always appreciated!