God of Time

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In frozen thaw time is a river that calls and I a ripple upon its rapids and falls. By God begun I will follow its end until my river is run and the waters are still until I rise again. Time and space and gravitational waves wash over me beside its portal graves. In flux and flow I’m between the spatial of fire and ice but God’s time is glacial and mine is not. He is the Omni and knows me by name, He is the flood and is my eternal flame. Written: February 2025 Note:The 5 Omnis of God are omnibenevolence; omnificence; omnipotence; omnipresence; and omniscience.

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/4/2025 12:00:00 PM

This poem has beautiful rhyme, smooth rhythm, and apodictic belief in faith. It was sincere pleasure to read.

Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/5/2025 1:08:00 AM

Thanks Hilda. I learned a new word today (apodictic). I was feeling very mortal when I wrote this. God bless.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2025 3:59:00 PM

You did a great job here showing your spiritual side

Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/3/2025 1:09:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. God is great.

Arlo Parker

Date: 2/28/2025 11:18:00 AM

Like 21 years never happened. This work has continued your impressive poetic journey. Bravo!

Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/28/2025 4:37:00 PM

Yep, my journey is a series of short trips.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/28/2025 6:34:00 AM

A reverent poem from the Keefer? Why not. A God of infinity hard to comprehend, yet we believe it is true. Someday our understanding of time and space may expand. For now, we wait on his salvation... In his time - 2 Peter 3:8,9

Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/28/2025 4:33:00 PM

From the moment we’re born the clock is ticking.

Terrell Martin

Date: 2/28/2025 4:21:00 AM

Hello Keith. The rhyme, flavor and depth of this poem is right up my alley meaning, it's the kind of poetry that I most prefer to read and write about. I love the imagery of the river coupled with fleeting time along with God's (the Omni) ultimate control over life and death. It's a gripping and enigmatic piece of poetry. Both thre poem and you go to my FAV's and hope to visit you again. Write on, Terrell

Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/28/2025 5:07:00 AM

Thanks Terrell. Stop by anytime. There’s a beer in the fridge. Cheers!