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John 1:9 KJV (We confess our sins & He faithfully forgives, cleansing us from all unrighteousness) I fell to my knees as the preacher prayed over me with a hand on my shoulder and with one gentle touch he showed me God's monogram signature of old as he gently exfoliated me, from my secret sins ; Private eyes downcast I gazed at a memorized snapshot of a much younger me, soaked to the skin by a crucifix in Santa Catalina/Spain I was young, foolish, and perfused in pain having lost both my parents I nearly went insane He didn't rush me, he didn't judge me nor did he ask my name As the sun went down by Plaza de la Reina, I felt my first authentic remorse and for the first time in my life, I realized that God was in control of my life; Falling across my soul like a lit feather followed by the sun, He came into my heart and gave me the gift of discernment. From that day forward I placed my trust in Him, and never looked back. Sponsor Regina McIntosh Contest Name Repent and Believe Jan 22, 2022

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Date: 1/30/2022 7:19:00 PM
Wow! Another level! Your words are like beacons of light to those who are in temporary misalignment (I prefer this word rather than sin). Congrats in your win!
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Date: 1/31/2022 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Seeker, this means so much coming from you, Love and peace :)
Date: 1/30/2022 1:14:00 PM
Rose, your poem was fantastic. Because we are all members of God's family, I believe we should all share in this cup. I congratulate you on your victory. Blessing Debra
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Date: 1/31/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Debra for taking the time to leave a comment, Peace & Love,
Date: 1/30/2022 8:00:00 AM
That's beautiful, Mystic Rose. Although you and I may differ slightly on our definition of God, we both know he is the one manning the ship :) Take good care.
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Date: 1/30/2022 7:33:00 AM
"He came into my heart and gave me the gift of discernment" - Wonderful experience. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/30/2022 4:30:00 AM
Wonderful wisdom and truth. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you Gina for honoring my poem in your contest, I am delighted that you like it. Peace & love ,
Date: 1/23/2022 5:52:00 AM
What a wonderful testimony of one who was touched by the healing hands of God . The story of this transformation from a young worldly person to a faithful devotee of God is so inspiring ! Now no looking back ! Thank you for sharing this great experience.
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:25:00 AM
Thank you Valsa for leaving a precious comment, Be well, God bless you
Date: 1/23/2022 3:32:00 AM
What an inviting testimony of your salvation experience. I like your faith-based contest entry. Reads like a great contender for the contest. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Sara, so much enjoyed your comment today, Be blessed
Date: 1/23/2022 1:41:00 AM
I am reminded of te Good Thief. Once one repents he attains heaven. Hugs.
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:24:00 AM
God is always in control watching and helping us Victor, thank you for reading.

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