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God Is Good-El

the old moon smiles from the sky the leaves slowly dancing cry golden fairies kiss the earth springs of water, a new birth I sat there and understood God is loving, God is good the old moon smiles from the sky

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/31/2021 4:45:00 AM

This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Marius Alexandru
Date: 7/31/2021 12:14:00 PM

thank you very much

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/24/2021 4:44:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Marius Alexandru
Date: 7/28/2021 11:55:00 AM

thank you and God bless you too

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/19/2021 2:00:00 AM

Beautiful, Marius ~ (marked as a 'haiku' but looks like a 'rhyme' to me)

Marius Alexandru
Date: 7/19/2021 1:45:00 PM

Thanks. I know. The poet that hosts a contest I entered this poem in, invented a new form, but because it is not yet on the site as a new form he suggested entering the poem I created in his new form as a haiku to be able to post it. (notice the EL in the title too) https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/elemental_14429

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/18/2021 3:49:00 PM

Yes, the earth speaks of God’s beauty, goodness, and longing for us!

Marius Alexandru
Date: 7/28/2021 11:56:00 AM

yes, it does... thank you for appreciating my poem