God Love

Imagine if you dare

My love be

A lifetime spent

Gazing lovingly into a loved one's eye's

Then later those both same eye's welling up

Knowing quite well for 1 of them 

Their time will soon be up

Wishing rather time was up for both

Neither wishing one second more

If that time be allocated on the premise
or condition it be spent apart

Better then love depart in one's lover's
warm welcoming embracing arm's

Till whenever forevermore and eternity
death shall not us do both part

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Date: 11/12/2021 8:03:00 AM
Hi Chris, your poems have a message every time - lovely write. Did you see the poem Anil posted, go to his latest one, a good person - and true South Africans stick together - you, Anil and me - ex President De Klerk, may he rest in peace. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/15/2021 1:03:00 PM
I did cheers Mev. Thanks for pointing it out. And again so glad to have you back. Hugs and blessings
Date: 11/11/2021 8:15:00 AM
I say first SHALOM, SHALOM AS IN HEALING AND PEACE OF JESUS. This poem seems "sad" and it may because we are both "pensioners" although U struck me as forever young until this poem. Keep writing, you are touching lives & leaving a legacy
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 11/15/2021 1:07:00 PM
Shalom for your kind words and comments Anil. Young of age only in my mentality or naivety. Peace hugs and blessings to you and yours
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