Goalposts Shift

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Goalposts shift, as we chase rainbows Bemused by our own mind Moment to moment, hunger grows Until with love aligned Trauma bonding with lust Choosing pathways unjust Love reservoir goes bust Soul adrift Goalposts shift 21-August-2021 Quietus

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/21/2021 10:24:00 AM

Soul adrift Goalposts shift - Beautiful Concept. I never knew about this Quietus style at all. Thank you for introducing this.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 8/21/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Chris! I like the brevity and rhythm of this format, which I’ve chosen to label Quietus :)