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Go Slow, Oh Heart

Go slow, Oh Heart! Go slow, Oh Heart, the path is slippery ahead. You have just started. So go steady on your first slope as the uphill may prove tough. Jump low, Oh heart, this is not your last. You have yet to jump a lot and fall as much. So go slow dear Heart, in times to come.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/17/2017 4:04:00 PM
good advise for a heart!! Two thumbs up!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 3/17/2017 11:00:00 PM
:) ...thanks for the read and nice comment. GL Sunita
Date: 8/25/2016 7:39:00 PM
you are so wise for your age, Sunita!!! Very nice one I found way back here!
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/26/2016 9:49:00 AM
:D :D Oh I feel like already growing old. A tough life experience, emotionally in many fields my dear. Thanks for going through and such nice comments you leave. I really wish we could meet one day and chat sitting by the sea side here. :) Sunita
Date: 7/6/2016 5:32:00 AM
Thanks. Glad you like it. :)
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Date: 7/6/2016 3:45:00 AM
I like this poem.. Practical and sweet. Hugs, Angie
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/26/2016 9:46:00 AM
Thanks . Glad you like it. :)
Date: 5/23/2016 12:52:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/24/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Funom. These are nice words. Regards Sunita.
Date: 5/17/2016 11:09:00 AM
I enjoyed this one :) Do keep writing :)
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 5/20/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thanks. I've read some of your poems. There is a depth to it. Keep it up. Have you published a collection yet?

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