go be it

Metaphors are of no use;
symbols but offer excuse,
attempting to cage the breeze,
putting our mind in deep freeze.

The thought of love is not love,
head and heart not hand in glove,
aloof in separation,
distanced from God’s creation.

To be in trance yet awake,
presence seeking no retake,
mood and mode embrace-release,
our bliss drenched soul flows with ease.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, i enjoyed the whole poem. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Hello Unseeing Seeker, You are wecome. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Seeker Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 7:10 PM
Thank you, Darlene dear.
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 11:32 PM
I really love that last verse. It says so much and so beautifully.
Seeker Avatar
April 10, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Thank you, Andrea dear
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