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Metaphors are of no use; symbols but offer excuse, attempting to cage the breeze, putting our mind in deep freeze. The thought of love is not love, head and heart not hand in glove, aloof in separation, distanced from God’s creation. To be in trance yet awake, presence seeking no retake, mood and mode embrace-release, our bliss drenched soul flows with ease.

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Date: 4/10/2025 3:36:00 PM
Hello Unseeking Seeker, i enjoyed the whole poem. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2025 10:08:00 AM
Hello Unseeing Seeker, You are wecome. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/10/2025 7:10:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene dear.
Date: 4/9/2025 11:32:00 PM
I really love that last verse. It says so much and so beautifully.
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Date: 4/10/2025 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea dear

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