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I see you crying, feigning pain yet once again, but go away, you cannot stay. Tears can't repair a broken heart lies tore apart, you did me wrong; now move along. I am not willing to forgive, live and let live won't work with me, so let me be. (Rhyme) 7/23/2021 12 Lines In Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 7/28/2021 5:10:00 AM
The last straw causes a clean break…no turning back… Congratulations, Emile!
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Date: 7/28/2021 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/27/2021 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Emile! Many relationship issues to ponder regarding decisions, forgiveness and pain! Blessings of resolution my friend!
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Date: 7/27/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2021 9:59:00 AM
Though showing aversion, the poem is full of forms and styles. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/26/2021 12:49:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2021 9:54:00 AM
Hi Emile, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2021 9:35:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your win, Emile. Janice
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Date: 7/26/2021 12:48:00 PM
Thanks, Janice, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/26/2021 5:55:00 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/26/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/23/2021 8:30:00 AM
Interesting quatrains, Emile. So much pathos wrapped up in this small package. Good writing, as always!
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Date: 7/23/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, your comments mean a lot to me my friend, Emile.

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