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Go. Go, already. The father told his son He bit his lip, clenched his fist The son did not see the father’s pain Go, Go, already. His heart, racing madly The son pivoted awkwardly ~ he quickly walked away

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Date: 5/15/2025 9:01:00 PM
It is hard to send them off into adulthood. This is intense, and hurts. I see the comment below, yeah, it does remind me of The Cat in the Cradle song, that song makes my husband cry, don't tell him I told you that ;)
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Date: 5/14/2025 2:19:00 PM
Nice one Gershon--reminds me of Cat Stevens Father and Son song.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2025 7:37:00 PM
Cradling the cat again, eh? lol. ~ gw
Date: 5/13/2025 8:26:00 PM
It’s sad when one’s children branch out on their own, leaving the parents at home alone. It’s a heartache… Beryl
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Date: 5/13/2025 8:10:00 PM
Sounds like a sad situation!
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