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We hadn’t visited for a while. I looked forward to seeing her smile. We came as often as we could. Probably not as often as we should. Mom was in a Nursing Home. Dementia had set in and she started to roam. So, this was the best place for her to be, As we had to move out of state to Kentucky. Walked in the door and saw her so thin. A strange man was just tucking her in. He was wrinkled and old with thinning grey hair. We were surprised, not sure he should be there. He explained he was the handyman named Sye. Saw mom’s blankets on the floor when passing by. We had come to town to sell mom’s things. To see how much her furniture brings. Her home is for sale, so everything must be sold. Advertised online, should get good prices we’re told. A woman had called, said she would buy it all. Her dad had made that furniture. She said on the call. He always used special gnarled wood. It was recognized. We agreed on the price. She said his work was prized. She asked how we had come by such expensive pieces. All Mom’s old furniture, she’d given some to her nieces. The furniture made of gnarled wood was sold. We went again to visit mom in her home for the old. To our surprise the handy man was again in her room. Both sat at a table of gnarled wood with a cedar perfume. I saw it advertised and had my daughter buy it, he said. So happy she had it with her all these years. A tear he shed. I made this furniture for her she was the one I adore. Told I died, she married another, I was a prisoner of war.

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Date: 10/8/2023 11:41:00 PM
Speaks, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image, Constance
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance. Please forgive the delay in responding.
Date: 10/3/2023 3:05:00 PM
Wow SV: What a love story of devotion and caring. I think I have heard of this prized wood for furniture.You are right about scents and the nostalgia it brings. For me it is the bush after rain and eucalyptus….that smells like home to me. Enjoy catching up with your visitors. SuZ
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Date: 10/21/2023 2:09:00 PM
Suz, thank you so much for your lovely comment. Yes I adore the scent of eucalypts too. My apologies for the delay in writing this reply. My granddaughters visit from the USA will be over soon, and I will make more time to read comment and reply to poems on Soup.
Date: 9/28/2023 12:08:00 PM
Very well written. Just two days ago i wrote about alzheimers too, didnt post yet, which is different but, your write about dementia got me to mention. That ending is so touching. Really moving write that made me feel so much. Loved this. Love the rhymes and storytelling and depth of emotions etc. also made me think, the power of some scents and perfume and how it can evoke so many thoughts. Sending you light always
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Date: 9/28/2023 12:28:00 PM
Yes some perfumes remind me of sad days, so I avoid them too, and it might sound crazy but every city too has their own special scent if that makes sense, i miss the smell of perth. Ah! Thank u for sharing your experience too. And i hope you hav a beautiful time with your family. Exciting youll be meeting her fiance , must be a very long flight for them all the way from california to Sydney. Ill miss reading you
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Date: 9/28/2023 12:25:00 PM
Oh Empress you are so right! i have a couple of large camphor wood chests and every time I open one, a flood of scented memories waft out. Some wood carries such a distinctive perfume. Thank you for your kind words. My granddaughter arrives tomorrow from California with her fiancé whom we haven't met. So I will be offline for a few weeks while they are here. Best wishes to you. SV
Date: 9/28/2023 2:16:00 AM
Nicely put together; interesting poem. Thank you, SV.
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Date: 9/28/2023 2:26:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting Andrew. Its appreciated. Cheers SV

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