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Oceans apart buried under sandy shores, a rare pearl slept comfortably behind her walls. Fate must have been kind, for a common man like me, to stumble upon her shell. As I brushed away her debris, astonished - my eyes could not believe this beauty, revealed before me. Spellbound - I could not help but stare, stunned by the glory of her magnificence. As she took one step forward, unutterable sensations, took a hold of my emotions. Yet I remained motionless, overmastered by this majestic heavenly vision. And I could have sworn it was a dream, until the softness of her fingertips, graced the imperfections of my soul, and for the first time it felt perfect. All of a sudden it felt like we were floating, ascending towards a myriad of stars, with the moon guarding us silently. Stardust sprinkled with the sight of her smile - how fortunate was I, to celebrate this artistry. Her lips blossomed like flowers as they succulently caressed mine. Breathless, without saying a word her eyes acknowledged my vow for eternal devotion with ever lasting love.
Simple Musings Silent One 19 September 2017

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Date: 1/1/2019 8:01:00 AM
You had me entranced with this one. Love it!
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:21:00 AM
WONDERFUL. Rare Pearl. Your musing touches Glory of Magnificence. Blessing
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:02:00 AM
beautiful piece
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Date: 3/6/2018 12:58:00 PM
Beautifully worded!
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Date: 2/27/2018 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful musings of the Silent One
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Date: 2/27/2018 4:04:00 PM
Such love centuries could protect in the vaults of Egyptian pyramids and even the Gods could not violate their boundaries. Beautiful SO
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 4:08:00 PM
Nice reply... Thanks
Date: 2/27/2018 3:45:00 PM
Wow, beautiful?? I love reading ur work but looks like U’ve been hiding for some time. Love this piece! Connie.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thank you... Not hiding Connie... silence is all around you
Date: 2/27/2018 2:37:00 PM
There is music in this poem! I love it, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/27/2018 1:22:00 PM
I wish I could be the "her" in this poem. So much love. Beautiful. :)))
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/27/2018 12:40:00 PM
it is a wonderful poem and the words are captivating and it keeps me lost throughout the poem.........great write Silent.........
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/19/2018 5:09:00 AM
Wonderfully written!
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Silent One
Date: 2/27/2018 2:40:00 PM
Thank you...
Date: 2/10/2018 10:25:00 AM
I was lost in the magnificence of this deeply soulful poem. Silent One your poem caressed my soul and filled me with a yearning that only such beauty could satisfy! It is a masterful piece. X
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:54:00 AM
WOW Beautiful imagery
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Date: 11/9/2017 4:50:00 AM
it's so cute because I've always loved the word "stardust" for some reason. It's romantic, right? Plus in your poem I feel the warmth and passion. It's a beautiful thing to share. Great poem sweet man, thank you :) lulllllooooooooooooooo lol
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Date: 10/27/2017 9:51:00 PM
The descriptions are magnificent creating the most peaking sentiments between a man and his perrrrfect soul mate. Imagery creation, a masterpiece. Your writing ability is beyond wonder.
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Date: 10/22/2017 7:42:00 AM
I felt that i was lost wile reading your poem. It is beautifully written. have aniceday my friend.
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Date: 10/20/2017 11:01:00 AM
Majestic Beauty
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Date: 10/19/2017 8:27:00 PM
Wonderful write Silent One. Your images are beautifully constructed using precisely worded phrases.
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Date: 10/8/2017 10:24:00 PM
This piece is mesmerizing, SO. Her beauty is extolled in the beauty of your words. Congrats on your number one spot with this fine piece.
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Date: 10/7/2017 10:56:00 AM
Spellbinding. Wonderfully so. xomo :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 1:04:00 AM
Hi S.O. congratulations on best new poems hot spot. Falling in love makes one dream strange dreams again...some very good ink here.
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:44:00 AM
Well what can I say, it s written so beautifully that truly I m lost for word, no word is good enough to describe it, the way you describe it was simply magnificent, each and every poem of yours is way better than one another, it s really is a masterpiece
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Date: 10/1/2017 8:48:00 PM
Sweet! Fluid! Mag-Tastic!
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Date: 9/30/2017 8:54:00 AM
Brilliant..
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:19:00 PM
Wow... what a masterpiece you have crafted! A fav for sure.
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