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Glory of Her Magnificence

Oceans apart buried under sandy shores, a rare pearl slept comfortably behind her walls. Fate must have been kind, for a common man like me, to stumble upon her shell. As I brushed away her debris, astonished - my eyes could not believe this beauty, revealed before me. Spellbound - I could not help but stare, stunned by the glory of her magnificence. As she took one step forward, unutterable sensations, took a hold of my emotions. Yet I remained motionless, overmastered by this majestic heavenly vision. And I could have sworn it was a dream, until the softness of her fingertips, graced the imperfections of my soul, and for the first time it felt perfect. All of a sudden it felt like we were floating, ascending towards a myriad of stars, with the moon guarding us silently. Stardust sprinkled with the sight of her smile - how fortunate was I, to celebrate this artistry. Her lips blossomed like flowers as they succulently caressed mine. Breathless, without saying a word her eyes acknowledged my vow for eternal devotion with ever lasting love.
Simple Musings Silent One 19 September 2017
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Herrick Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:33 AM
I HAVE BEEN THERE! Glorious MAGNIFICANCE ...once again. NICE! Poetic Brilliance. ~Jude
Watt Avatar
February 14, 2020 at 2:38 PM
This is transcendent poetry... well done
Foster Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 8:52 AM
This was simply beautiful. Ann
Smith Carter Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 2:56 PM
It's been awhile since I was on the site and I looked for something new from you as I heard you had won a weekly recognition. Well, Congratulations! I found this poem from your Musings and it is exquisite. Would that all could stumble upon their shell and find a persona so imbued with their fondest wishes at every level! Exquisite!!
Staton Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 8:01 AM
You had me entranced with this one. Love it!
Dutta Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:21 AM
WONDERFUL. Rare Pearl. Your musing touches Glory of Magnificence. Blessing
Van Ross Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Beautiful musings of the Silent One
White Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Such love centuries could protect in the vaults of Egyptian pyramids and even the Gods could not violate their boundaries. Beautiful SO
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 4:08 PM
Nice reply... Thanks
Moraba Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Wow, beautiful?? I love reading ur work but looks like U’ve been hiding for some time. Love this piece! Connie.
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thank you... Not hiding Connie... silence is all around you
Sami Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:37 PM
There is music in this poem! I love it, Silent One.
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you...
Leduc Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:22 PM
I wish I could be the "her" in this poem. So much love. Beautiful. :)))
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you...
Imtiaz Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 12:40 PM
it is a wonderful poem and the words are captivating and it keeps me lost throughout the poem.........great write Silent.........
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:39 PM
Thank you...
Staton Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Wonderfully written!
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Thank you...
Sacks Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 10:25 AM
I was lost in the magnificence of this deeply soulful poem. Silent One your poem caressed my soul and filled me with a yearning that only such beauty could satisfy! It is a masterful piece. X
Folker Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 9:54 AM
WOW Beautiful imagery
Scars Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:50 AM
it's so cute because I've always loved the word "stardust" for some reason. It's romantic, right? Plus in your poem I feel the warmth and passion. It's a beautiful thing to share. Great poem sweet man, thank you :) lulllllooooooooooooooo lol
Goudreau Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 9:51 PM
The descriptions are magnificent creating the most peaking sentiments between a man and his perrrrfect soul mate. Imagery creation, a masterpiece. Your writing ability is beyond wonder.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:42 AM
I felt that i was lost wile reading your poem. It is beautifully written. have aniceday my friend.
Imtiaz Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 11:01 AM
Majestic Beauty
Inman Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Wonderful write Silent One. Your images are beautifully constructed using precisely worded phrases.
Manassian Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 10:24 PM
This piece is mesmerizing, SO. Her beauty is extolled in the beauty of your words. Congrats on your number one spot with this fine piece.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 10:56 AM
Spellbinding. Wonderfully so. xomo :)
Breedt Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 1:04 AM
Hi S.O. congratulations on best new poems hot spot. Falling in love makes one dream strange dreams again...some very good ink here.
Ajmal Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Well what can I say, it s written so beautifully that truly I m lost for word, no word is good enough to describe it, the way you describe it was simply magnificent, each and every poem of yours is way better than one another, it s really is a masterpiece
Wilae Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Sweet! Fluid! Mag-Tastic!
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