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Invented by Gregory R Barden it's comprised of at least six stanzas, each stanza consistent with itself in rhyme, and decreasing in the number of lines with each stanza, with the final stanza created of one line of the rhyme of each stanza, a rhyme scheme of AAAAA, BBBB, CCC, DD, E, ABCDE.

Sad times are heading our way global warming is here, and it's here to stay. Oceans are rising; time is ticking away, we didn't listen to what science had to say, and gambled tomorrow's future for profit and play. We don't treat our planet as we should, yet spread the lie; all is good. And giving little thought to brotherhood, we're only concerned with our neighborhood. Children die of hunger in a world of plenty, as the rich drain the poor, penny by penny, consuming all, leaving little, if any. Guns have replaced the dog as Man's best friend, we won't abandon them, even if it means our end. Hurricanes are morphing into monstrous storms. And still, no one listens to scientists today, depleting jungles to meet our demand for wood. Planet-wide pollution caused by so many continues to rise as we overextend, and soon, saturation will establish new norms.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/6/2020 12:09:00 PM
Wondering if somehow the COVID-19 threat has something to do with Climate Control. But I guess that would be conspiracy theory. I like this one too, Emile Pinet. Enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/20/2022 12:07:00 PM
Thank you Reason, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/29/2018 9:15:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Line, your support is always welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/29/2018 9:01:00 AM
very thoughtful & thought provoking - thanks for the placement in your contest (I enjoyed Andrea's new form)
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Jack, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/29/2018 12:39:00 AM
Excellent, Emile! Please post this on my page, Poetic Justice. I just love it. It has such an important message. I've been thinking about "global warming" all day today and here is your perfectly expressed poem about it. I don't believe it's a coincidence.
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Date: 11/29/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Carole, I will post it on your page, but whenever I post on your page it takes forever to be cleared...I will try it again my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/28/2018 10:37:00 AM
Emile, love your theme on what is happening today. Unfortunately, our "leaders"are still saying these people print fake numbers. Mother Nature is and will continue to make us pay for our stupidity. Thank you for your write.
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Date: 11/28/2018 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Carlos, your comments are most welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/28/2018 10:23:00 AM
Wait a second, we were told not to worry about global warming. We were told it is a myth, a fantasy, by an expert, a man who admits he does not read. So how can this poem make any sense? Ha! I am so laughing my guts off here. Good one my friend, TRUTH news, in the form of a poem!
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Date: 11/28/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Caren, global warming doesn't require Trump tp believe it, it is on its way anyway. Your comments as always are welcome my friend, Emile.

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