Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 26th December 2023

Received Poem of the Day - 28th December 2023

 

Glimmers of Love

How long will I love you, often you ask
Forever and a day, my love will last
Till there’s no blossom or leaves upon trees
Or pretty daffodils dancing o’er breeze.

Till clouds cease to form patterns in the sky
All seas and rivers begin running dry
Till all poets have no poetic prose
Or night has no beginning, day no close.

Till no man or creature walks upon earth
Gold or silver has no value or worth
Till there are no birds flying on the wing
Or voices aren’t heard and no one can sing.

Till the day we take our Heavenly place
Living for eternity in God’s grace
With time to dance among stars up above
Darling I send this in glimmers of love.

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Jennifer Proxenos January 6, 2024 at 8:08 AM Congratulations dear Belle, a beautifully rhymed and creative love poem. A most deserved POTD - I hope you enjoyed the honor showered on you on the 30th December. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer Beryl Edmonds January 6, 2024 at 2:03 PM Thank you dear Jennifer, it was the 28th December, and I truly did enjoy the day. Blessings and hugs in return, Belle

Sotto Poet December 29, 2023 at 9:50 AM Your poem was amazing, Belle. It's like you were talking about love that never ends and always stays the same, which is a special gift from above. Congratulations on your POTD and Happy New Year to you and your hubby Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:31 PM Thank you Sotto for your comments on this poem, the congratulations and wishes for a Happy New Year, the same goes to you and yours too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith December 29, 2023 at 8:39 AM Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A lovely/wonderful write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away................. Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:28 PM I didn’t know that I was on that list Paula, thank you for telling me so. Happy New Year and keep writing… Belle

Ink Empress December 28, 2023 at 11:55 PM Congratulations on receiving POTD. Well deserved Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:25 PM Thank you so much Ink, appreciated… Belle

Hiya Sharma December 28, 2023 at 7:43 PM Back with my heartiest congratulations for this beautiful honour of POTD, this poem is truly deserving~ keep shining and writing :) Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:24 PM Thank you again Hiya, very much so :) Belle

Brandy Nicole December 28, 2023 at 6:54 PM ' Forever and a day. ' That's my favorite line. . . . Because *love* will always be. It's never-ending. This is beautiful, spiritual and romantic, all at the same time. Congratulations Belle, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:23 PM Thank you for your lovely words and thoughts on this poem Brandy. All the best to you too, with hugs… Belle

Mystic Rose Rose December 28, 2023 at 12:53 PM how precious every word is, penned just right, congrats on your POTD dear poet Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:21 PM Thank you for that Rose, very much appreciated. Belle

Susan Lawrence December 28, 2023 at 8:16 AM Just beautiful dear Belle. Love abounds forever arriving on your skilled pen . Big hugs and congratulations on POTD ! Blessings. Susan :) Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:19 PM Thank you very much Susan. Blessings in return, Belle

Paula Goldsmith December 28, 2023 at 8:05 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Your Glimmers of Love is a lovely/wonderful write. A FAV for me. Happy New Year 2024 writing away.............................. Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:10 PM Thank you for the fave and nice words on this poem. Happy New Year to you too… Belle

Linda Alice Fowler December 28, 2023 at 7:57 AM Such a warm, cuddly love poem Belle. Quite beautiful. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :) Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:08 PM That’s so nice of you Linda, thank you… Belle

Bill Baker December 28, 2023 at 7:49 AM Congratulations, Belle, on your POTD! It is a beautiful love poem that flows like the unconditional Love you write about. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Hugs, Bill Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:07 PM Thank you dear friend Bill, I enjoyed the day tremendously. Hugs in return, Belle

Nancy Kaufman December 28, 2023 at 7:16 AM Dear Beryl, What a sweet love poem you have written my dear. Congratulations on this well crafted poem and enjoy the well deserved POTD recognition. Beryl Edmonds December 29, 2023 at 3:05 PM Thank you very muvch Nancy. Much appreciated… Belle

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 28, 2023 at 6:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear Beryl! How enchanting your poem is - so eternally poignant! To me it is a romantic masterpiece! To my Faves! Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 6:10 AM Dear Malabika, thank you so very much for those lovely words and the fave, I’m truly honoured… Belle

Vijay Pandit December 28, 2023 at 5:52 AM BIG congrats on POTD, Beryl. Much enjoyed the eternal vibes you convey--so heartfelt! Enjoy your special day. Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 6:06 AM Thank you so much for those lovely words Vijay, I’m truly enjoying the day… Belle

Karen Jones December 28, 2023 at 5:26 AM What a warm romantic potd Beryl! Just love it! Congratulations! Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 6:03 AM Thank you Karen, so pleased you enjoyed the poem, your words are a joy to my heart… Belle

Unseeking Seeker December 28, 2023 at 3:57 AM Oh wow, a super duper wow! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Beryl Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 6:00 AM Wow! For those complimentary words and a huge thank you to Unseeking Seeker. Blessings, Belle

Suzanne Delaney December 28, 2023 at 3:41 AM A lovely tribute to romance and everlasting love. Congratulatiions. On POTD. All the best, SuZ Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 3:42 AM Thank you SuZ, all the best to you too… Belle

Tania Kitchin December 28, 2023 at 3:35 AM Belle, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD. Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 3:40 AM Thank you Tania. Dry much… Belle

Deb M December 28, 2023 at 2:28 AM Belle your poem is so incredibly moving and beautiful….pure unconditional love right there! Congratulations on a well deserved POTD lovely Belle! Debx Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 2:40 AM Dear Deb, thank you very much, this lovely surprise has made my day. Belle x

Christina Bowring December 28, 2023 at 1:50 AM Gosh- dear Belle this is absolutely beautiful and wonderful to recite. Many congratulations on POTD - such a worthy choice. The title is gorgeous too. ‘ Till there’s no blossom or leaves upon trees’. Heavenly romantic and I love, love, love it! It’s a FAV from me too :) Enjoy your celebratory day. Xx Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 2:10 AM Thank you so much Christina, I never expected this, but what a lovely surprise it is, has made my day.Love every word you’ve said, I’ll treasure them… Belle

Tom Cunningham December 28, 2023 at 1:41 AM Love is for eternity in this world and the next. Congratulations to you on Belle on the well deserved honour of POTD. Tom Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 2:06 AM For eternity love certainly is, the last waltz will last forever. Thank you Tom… Belle

Regina Mcintosh December 28, 2023 at 1:13 AM Wow this is amazing! Love it congratulations on potd! God bless you with love, Gina Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 1:18 AM Thank you so much Gina, God bless you with love too… Belle

Maria Fernandez-Garcia December 28, 2023 at 12:55 AM Many Congratulations on the POTD Beryl. Awesome love poem. Very romantic. Have a great day! Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 1:00 AM Thank you very much Maria, have a wonderful day yourself… Belle

Silent One December 28, 2023 at 12:37 AM Congratulations on potd Beryl Edmonds December 28, 2023 at 12:58 AM Thank you Silent One, this has come as a lovely surprise… Belle

Silent One December 27, 2023 at 11:57 AM Beryl my dear friend, Your poem is a captivating ode to enduring love, expressed with both tenderness and a timeless quality. The repetition of 'Till' creates a rhythmic flow that echoes the everlasting nature of your commitment. The vivid imagery paints a picture of a love that transcends the cycles of nature and the passage of time... Beryl Edmonds December 27, 2023 at 3:41 PM Thank you my friend silent One, I’m delighted to read your thoughts on this poem and appreciate every word. Bless you, Belle

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