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Gliding In Endless Blue

"My life is a story, yours is" By Poet Every life is an inimitable story ... My life is a story, yours is. Being a girl restricted my movement, Being a girl restricted my feelings, Being a girl restricted my freedom of speech, And pursuit of knowledge. I was born in a country which regained their freedom from a hundred years of foreign rule.. People were excited, ecstatic, full of enthusiasm… A new day was in view, But for women, society was still closed, Women did not have the power to decide their own path, Express their opinions, aspirations, or feelings! Creativity is the open sky which let me free. A little girl unlocked her boundless imagination When life was a prison for her. There was no barrier when passions took flight, Like an open-winged bird gliding in the endless blue, In the infinity she soared high. Became a new Me! No more identify myself with the pictures from the past! From a demure, soft-spoken, bashful girl, Progressively transforming Into a strong, resolute, determined, soul. created myself ~ with bits and pieces ~ multi-hued fragments of my life. My story is a story of finding freedom, ~ finding my distinctive voice! Reference: The Indian Independence Act was passed in 1947. The act created two new independent dominions; India and Pakistan. Pakistan was split into Pakistan and East Pakistan which is now Bangladesh. The Bengal and Punjab provinces were partitioned between the two new countries. Inspired by My Poem "Every Life, An Inimitable Story" For "Freedom" Premier Poetry Contest (Edited on March 18, 2022) Sponsor: Robert James Liguori EIGHTH PLACE A Brian strand 1096 Poetry Contest FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/27/2022 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations, again!
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Date: 3/22/2022 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Loved your ending. Thanks for the note on the bottom. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:54:00 AM
“vive la liberté”. Freedom for females was long coming and celebrated by all women around the world. This poem is very beautiful Mala. I am so happy you have a voice to share in Freedom. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/22/2022 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Connie. You are right - all women in the world can celebrate their freedom - which was denied to them for thousands of years. I have seen a few amazingly powerful women in my family - and I am inspired by them. I am fortunate to find my voice, and I really want to support others to find theirs. Love and Blessings, Dearest Friend.
Date: 3/22/2022 9:34:00 AM
Dear Mala, Your poem beautifully tells of your rebirth into a woman who can now express herself poetically. Such a magnificent transformation you have made!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/22/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thanks, Ann. I was very much into literature -reading and writing from an early age, and my family, especially my parents always encouraged me. But even their hands were tied - the society was not free for women till now - so I had some struggles to find my identity.
Date: 3/22/2022 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful write! Evocative and mind-provoking revelations from your humble self. Congratulations dear Mala..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/22/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, JCB. My country got freedom with huge sacrifices, but individual freedom is also precious and hard to find in many circumstances.
Date: 3/22/2022 1:56:00 AM
Great beginning line. "My story is a story of finding freedom" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/22/2022 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! Freedom is precious for individuals as it is for nations. It doesn't come easily.
Date: 3/18/2022 11:39:00 AM
Hello Mala, you have come a long, long way. Friendship & Love, Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2022 11:22:00 AM
Hello Mala, that is what i thought. Love & Friendship, Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/18/2022 3:42:00 PM
Yes, Darlene, you are very right. It was a long way! Love and Friendship ~ Mala

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