Glass Slippers

Inspired by Victor Buhagiar’s romantic writes.

GLASS SLIPPERS

He sees their shine -
on his knees, he’d kiss
her glass slippers.

The ballroom floor -
first date jitters,
diamond waxed.

The newness of their faces,
skintight with anticipation -
illumination of the mirrors.

The crystal chandelier,
like a tall tale;
simply a fairy tale.

Arising like the North star,
he dares to sit -
she’s vulnerable

like her glass shoe,
still breakable,
but before she can entertain

her timorous thoughts,
his lips warm hers, like apple cider -
hot cinnamon elixir.

The gears in play,
puzzle pieces find their match,
a stone’s throw from the hearth.

Her glass slippers so shiny,
shapely heels -
he thinks, ‘what if she lost just one?’

‘Would I find her and remove the other one,
too?’ Such thoughts make him blush.
Her red lips amuse his thoughts.

Illusions of cologne, polished hair,
a hand held out for a waltz -
her pulse in the dream.

He’s swept up as her gown
whirls around and around,
hypnotic and his knees

nearly buckle
as her spray of sweet-scented hair
spreads to his heart.

The cyclonic pull
of the storm
renders them both breathless.

The eye
is hard to find -
they waltz in the air.

12/7/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ashley Avatar
December 9, 2021 at 10:58 AM
This is beautiful, Kim. I adore your romantic pen and admire your poetic skill. I, too was swept up and away in "the cyclonic pull of the storm" and left "breathless". Your last line a grand finale, indeed! The pixie-dust of Victor's inspiration worked its magic wonderfully, I see :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:40 PM
This shines like a diamond and twinkles better than the nearest star. I think that it should replace 'Cinderella' in the Disney pantheon. 6 Stars! Glistening! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Thanks so much! ~ hugs
Kingston Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Hello, I came across your poem when I was surfing around. The title intrigued me. Aw love, is there anything better? Cinderella, my favorite movie as a child. I think all young girls would love a pair of glass slippers. I knew I did. My favorite line in your poem is, "The gears in play, puzzle pieces find their match... I'm glad I found your poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Thank you, Marikate! <3
Buehler Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 10:22 AM
This exquisite creation left me breathless, Kim. Such imagery! It's a fave for me. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, sweet Evelyn! <3 Kim
Buhagiar Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:48 AM
My poems are not all romantic. But thank you for your comment and assure you you fairy tale is much more romantic than mine. Very well done. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs
Awtry Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Wow! Just wow! Fave!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, P.S.! <3
Lane Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 7:07 AM
If that kind of romance gets caught up in a storm... let the winds blow! Interesting approach, the way the last line of one stanza begins the next, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Thank you so much, Lin :)
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