Glass

Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. Anton Chekhov
the thunderclap of breaking pane, frightening. splintered shards - remains of jagged lightning. those tears I bleed… my fist is raw. blackness crawls out of the shattered hole. a fearsome flood of grinding rain insane. my knuckles sore black and blue. i’ve kicked a metaphor - the dog. its bite worse than the storm. the glass-eye moon reflects my mood, outside the door, where i was rash. those tears i bleed on a handkerchief so I won’t forget the glass…so I won’t forget the glass… 2/22/2023 Writing Challenge - G Words Constance La France - sponsor
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Date: 3/6/2023 10:49:00 AM
I am returning again to this poem. Did you know I faved it the first time I saw it?:) Regards, just me
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2023 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! I so appreciate it! :)
Date: 3/2/2023 12:13:00 AM
Kim, wonderful free verse poem, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, I like the quote too, blessings, Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/6/2023 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much! Your contests are enjoyable!
Date: 2/27/2023 10:48:00 AM
Hey, this is amazing work!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 2/25/2023 11:33:00 AM
- A great creative poem, Kim:) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2023 7:46:00 PM
"those tears i bleed on a handkerchief" - great writing. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2023 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula!
Date: 2/24/2023 1:03:00 PM
Big congratulations on your contest podium win, Kim. Your poem is so deserving of such recognition.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/26/2023 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, as always, dear poet!
Date: 2/23/2023 7:59:00 AM
Quite powerful and esoteric.... ! This is not an average man's cup of tea. I must admit that this is too deep for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 8:19:00 AM
It is more of a mood…thank you, Valsa!
Date: 2/23/2023 2:06:00 AM
Wow….Great poem Kim it has a strength about it! Enjoyed…Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:46:00 AM
Thank you for that! Hugs
Date: 2/23/2023 12:04:00 AM
Creative, very good, Kim:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 2/22/2023 11:18:00 PM
Very imaginative poem. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2023 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 2/22/2023 4:26:00 PM
Sometimes we say things, do things in the spur of the moment, that we come to deeply regret. "to err...." I am reminded of an old saying, "never eat thine own heart" -- This is excellent poetry. Actually top shelf. You get a FAVE from me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/22/2023 4:38:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joe!
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