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Glare Ice

the Crow looks at me....

                       perched atop sub-zero tree

glass between our thoughts

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Sara Kendrick

March 31, 2022 at 12:47 PM

Good one. I got a chuckle. I have only seen a few winters like that, but I could feel the scene. Congrats on your work being on Brian's winners' list. Sara

Valsa George

March 19, 2022 at 1:32 AM

A haiku in every sense ! Beautiful, James ! Congrats !

Christuraj Alex

March 18, 2022 at 9:16 PM

"Grass between our thoughts" - Beutiful. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 14, 2010 at 3:01 AM

Perfection in this haiku, Jimbo. Smiles, Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

January 27, 2010 at 8:36 AM

Hi Jimbo! Really a beatiful Haiku. Thank you for your comments...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

January 23, 2010 at 12:44 PM

Love how you write a haiku! andrea

Marty Owens

January 21, 2010 at 6:41 PM

Wonderful Haiku....Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 20, 2010 at 6:36 AM

Hi Jimbo.. enjoyed your blog comments to Karen about the game this weekend and hopefully the Super Bowl... both my teams lost so rooting for Favre and Breese... two best QB's in the league... blessings with luv... Linda-Marie..

James Peranteau

January 11, 2010 at 7:26 AM

This Haiku is fantastic Mr. Goff ! This is going right to mine Fav's !!!! TY james

Brian Strand

January 10, 2010 at 11:37 PM

One of your best Jim and one forb the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for yoyur welcome comments today.

Robert A. Dufresne

January 10, 2010 at 3:47 PM

Cool for sure, James. Reminds me of Arlo Guthrie tune. "old crow watching from a tree...he's got his hungry eye on me..." I sang it as I wrote it but that may not have come across too well! :) Cool Haiku! -Robert

Sara Kendrick

January 10, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Man that sounds very cold, very cold. Keep the icicle pen moving so that it won't totally freeze the ink. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

January 10, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Ah, we want to know exactly what this crow was thinking, Jimbo! Perhaps he thought your hair might make a warmer next than the "sub-zero tree." Very clever and thought-provoking. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 6, 2010 at 6:54 PM

Great Haiku Jimbo.. it is very cold here and ice is glaring everywhere in New Jersey.. luv this analogy .. HNY 2010 with blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.