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Glare Ice

the Crow looks at me....

                       perched atop sub-zero tree

glass between our thoughts

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2022 12:47:00 PM

Good one. I got a chuckle. I have only seen a few winters like that, but I could feel the scene. Congrats on your work being on Brian's winners' list. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 3/19/2022 1:32:00 AM

A haiku in every sense ! Beautiful, James ! Congrats !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/18/2022 9:16:00 PM

"Grass between our thoughts" - Beutiful. Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/14/2010 3:01:00 AM

Perfection in this haiku, Jimbo. Smiles, Dane Ann

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/27/2010 8:36:00 AM

Hi Jimbo! Really a beatiful Haiku. Thank you for your comments...Gert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2010 12:44:00 PM

Love how you write a haiku! andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 1/21/2010 6:41:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku....Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2010 6:36:00 AM

Hi Jimbo.. enjoyed your blog comments to Karen about the game this weekend and hopefully the Super Bowl... both my teams lost so rooting for Favre and Breese... two best QB's in the league... blessings with luv... Linda-Marie..

James Peranteau

Date: 1/11/2010 7:26:00 AM

This Haiku is fantastic Mr. Goff ! This is going right to mine Fav's !!!! TY james

Brian Strand

Date: 1/10/2010 11:37:00 PM

One of your best Jim and one forb the favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for yoyur welcome comments today.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/10/2010 3:47:00 PM

Cool for sure, James. Reminds me of Arlo Guthrie tune. "old crow watching from a tree...he's got his hungry eye on me..." I sang it as I wrote it but that may not have come across too well! :) Cool Haiku! -Robert

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2010 1:12:00 PM

Man that sounds very cold, very cold. Keep the icicle pen moving so that it won't totally freeze the ink. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2010 12:57:00 PM

Ah, we want to know exactly what this crow was thinking, Jimbo! Perhaps he thought your hair might make a warmer next than the "sub-zero tree." Very clever and thought-provoking. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/6/2010 6:54:00 PM

Great Haiku Jimbo.. it is very cold here and ice is glaring everywhere in New Jersey.. luv this analogy .. HNY 2010 with blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.