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Given a Shove

My friend shared a tiktok Some 'rustic', good advice It's cheered me up immensely And made me feel nice I've now had a cup of tea Snuggled with the dog I'm going to get outside My brain I will unfog I'm not quite sure where I'll go Or what I'll get up to Just move about and interact Improve my point of view

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Date: 2/27/2023 11:05:00 AM
We all need that shove out the door! Very good. Speaks volumes to me!
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Date: 2/27/2023 11:08:00 AM
Haha thanks Kim!
Date: 2/27/2023 3:23:00 AM
We all need such advice, I guess, nice rhyme, DD:)
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Date: 2/27/2023 3:36:00 AM
It was the small laugh I needed to get over myself :)

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