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Give Up - the Ghost

Bidding tearful adieu, I sat on his grave, And his spirit stood beside me, Consoling me to return home. As I opened eyes to my conscious , Ghosts encircled me in black attire, Their orange faces wore a smile, Greeted with shriek sounds they proffered. No life to be seen in full moon, Not even as dark clouds passed by, Palpitations that anyone could hear, Chest went airless for a minute, Eyes were dry and reflexes dampened, Shiver that followed down the spine. Scare of dying never before, Traversed my nerves to a faint, Darkness all over and silence of a mourn, I found him standing next to me, Both breathing into the same air, That was a farewell to my life !! New for Contest- Everything Halloween Written on 22/10/13 Old for contest on theme- gothic and romantic both Now entered for contest "Your own fav Halloween poem" by Carol Eastman Awarded 1st place win

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Date: 10/16/2015 10:38:00 PM
A chilling poem, Dr. Upma. Perfect for the Halloween season!... Congrats on the win!
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Date: 10/13/2015 3:01:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
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Date: 10/13/2015 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Upma. Julia, xx
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Date: 10/9/2015 10:14:00 PM
Congrats Upma on your halloween win! Love, Balveen
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Ghosts in black... Creepy imagery was great!
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:42:00 PM
DR, CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 11:37:00 AM
A very eerie tale of ghostly encounters. Well done. Congrats on the win
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Date: 10/23/2013 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Dr. Upma
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:14:00 AM
A poignant tale. Congratulations on the win:)
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:00:00 PM
congratulations....PD
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