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Girl Rising

To live under oppression is terrible watching every word you utter never quite sure what sets him off what he laughs at one day, the next a flying fist smashes you to the floor Always fearful, guts in a spin of tension listening at night for the creak of stairs knowing you will be brutally raped just an object, a chattel to be used the heartache, pain and despair. The feeling of helplessness abounds you wake one morning to find all is quiet, not even sounds of snoring fearfully you walk through the house. Then, there he lies bloated not moving he has drowned in his own vomit a kind policeman takes your hand leads you off to see a doctor Who is shocked by your battered body tenderly they question you stunned into silence by your words you are taken to a pretty home A kindly woman cares for you suddenly at the age of 14 you are finally free of him can go out when you like even finally have some friends And are able to say what you want with no fear of flying fists lashing out baffled, bewildered you slowly adapt savouring the greatest gift of all Freedom, yes Freedom, so priceless the chains of oppression have slipped away after 14 years of being humiliated and oppressed suddenly a new world opens up before you where the choices are limited only by yourself FREEDOM written 07/ 21/2013 contest: Girl Rising

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Date: 8/9/2013 11:17:00 AM
Shadow, this is such a gripping poem full of harsh reality and so well expressed. Just absolutely stunning work ... congrats :)
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Date: 8/7/2013 6:45:00 PM
Too many women live this life I am so glad this one won free! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:25:00 PM
awesome story in this winning poem, Shadow. Big congratulations to you.
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:46:00 AM
hi Andrea ty very much glad you like it Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/6/2013 7:35:00 AM
Shadow this broke my heart then filled my spirit...with hope....congratulations on your win....
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:48:00 AM
hi Donna glad it filled your spirit ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 8:58:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Shadow! Annalise
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:49:00 AM
ty so much Annalise also for reading Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 7:30:00 PM
Outstanding piece, congratulations! Thanks for your entry.
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Date: 8/7/2013 5:51:00 AM
hi Richard Ty for running contest good entries in it. TY for placing my work Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 10:14:00 AM
Very emotional & deep...excellent write shadow...congratulations on your well deserved win:) cherie
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:28:00 PM
hi Cherie yes it is Ty for your comments and congrats Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 9:56:00 AM
Shadow....this is such a clear....clear look into the life of a woman who is abused...the physical abuse translated into psychological scarring for life. Your write made me go through it and feel the fear, hopelessness, and relief! Superb write...heartfelt congrats on this.
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:30:00 PM
hi Eileen you are so kind Ty very encouraging Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 9:50:00 AM
:-) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:31:00 PM
Ty Scat appreciated Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 9:01:00 AM
Shadow, ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:32:00 PM
hi Linda and ty so much Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 8:50:00 AM
great one shadow.I love this poem.Congrats on your win.(:c Jenish
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:34:00 PM
Jenish hi ty for lovely comments and congrats Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/5/2013 8:34:00 AM
Yes,lady freedom is priceless...Lovely piece,Shadow..Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:46:00 AM
Hi OA and ty for your time reading and congrats Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/28/2013 11:12:00 AM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was a winner when you wrote it excellent thoughts written herte thank you so much for sharing. Loved it poet
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Date: 7/28/2013 1:56:00 PM
Ty Sean glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/21/2013 5:16:00 AM
- Yes freedom, is very priceless !!!! - Well done Shadow !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/21/2013 8:48:00 AM
truly so Anne Ty for stopping in Shadow x smiles

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