Girl At the Creek

Exciting walk; barefoot on warm rock while cold spring water
burbles past me. “Hey! over here.” she calls. 
A puppet, my instinct guides me there again;
Creek ends in dark green pond. “Hi” I answer.

My body tingles with sensation sweet as wading I see her, 
waterfall roars behind; scenario same.
“Did you stay in water since last year my Mermaid?”
Glimpse at my watch “It’s noon and so hot!”

Her laughs chime in the tranquility; pearly white teeth gleam
framed by coral pink moist lips and wet black curly tresses glisten,
a tendril on face lively. “You’ve not changed!”

“Try me… I’ve forgotten you.” I did, entangled in rush of time. 
She stares at me for seconds and a sexy smile she offers “Challenge accepted!” 
She swims nearer, black skin, sheath of silver under scorching sun.
A pang of desire; I strip and plunge, swift as dolphin.
“Oh!” she gasps, receding.

We meet naked in warm water, vegetation lush under feet.
“So?” she teases, splashing water on my face and we giggle foolishly.
We dive to the falling water. It all comes to me; we kiss again passionately
and make love, scaring fishes and flies.

“Say, will you leave me again?” Guilty, I embrace her more and more.
Side by side on the grass, the sun kisses our body dry as we hold hands.
The clouds chase one another,  “Marry me.” I blurt out. 
She gasps and sits quickly. I join her “Marry me and let me take you away from here.”

She fixes me speechless and moans feebly “I belong here…” 
Fingers rake my hairs, I'm impatient, “Why should it always be like this…the parting?” Heart wrenching look of hers; wits I lose and hug her tight for long.
“Ok darling… I’ll settle here with you. Later we’ll sort out things.” She’s so radiant, as if sun infiltrates her body.

She stands, a siren, to wrap herself in her colorful sarong.
“Come tonight to father to ask for my hand… and we marry.” 
She disappears, feet gazelle like on the grass untrampled.

Before the large hut, I stand; the chief sits, hookah besides him as
in dismay he gapes. 
“I can’t say he is mad or he sees me as one!”
Mermaid peers through curtains and smiles.

To old banyan tree, the tribe leads me; ribbons of all colors hanged flying to
and fro. Mermaid is here,
“Untie this and bind it to your wrist, my love.” I obey.
”Now, go back.” 

I’m angry “Why?” She vanishes. In no time, she sits besides the tree, humming a tune, eyes lost in gaze towards sky.

The chief says to all “I wish, now, my dearest daughter to rest in peace!!”

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Date: 9/8/2016 6:30:00 PM
Brilliant story telling, Sunita. The imagery about them in the water was so nice.
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Date: 9/10/2016 3:58:00 AM
I particularly enjoyed writing this poem and I'm glad you could grasp the core of the write, of course as an experienced and fine poet. I admire your insight. Thanks for the nice comment. Love Sunita
Date: 9/8/2016 6:29:00 PM
A wonderful tale of fantasy and romance... I enjoyed this very much, Sunita! Very well written with such vivid detail!
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Date: 9/10/2016 3:55:00 AM
Thanks Kelly for the read and nice comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate much Sunita :)
Date: 9/5/2016 6:53:00 PM
Your love story is enchanting, and beautifully playful Sunita, I really like it. The things that die for love's sake, and the life that awakens for it's promise and power...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/5/2016 11:21:00 PM
I'm really thrilled this morning reading your comment. So beautiful and thank for giving me some of your precious time. You discern it right. Those are lucky to come back and acquire love even after death!(if all those beliefs and story written about love is true....) With much appreciation, Sunita :)
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