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Girl At a Window

Girl at a Window Young girl at a window where do you stare, What is it that fascinates you so much? You smile a little, for whom do you look; Whose are those beads your fingers touch? Are they a gift, a token from another, Is it he for whom you look, in the street More enigmatic than Mona Lisa? Is there some person you wait to greet? What interests you as time goes by Leaning, patient over the window sill, Have you been there, watching, for long and Will you wait with such attention until He glances up from the throng beneath? Pausing when he sees you gazing there, Red sunlit ringlets and rose blushed cheeks. And does he recognize the beads you wear? From the painting ‘Girl at a Window’ by Rembrandt van Rijn, 1645. This painting now hangs in the Dulwich Picture Gallery, London, U.K. http://www.dulwitchpicturegalley.org.uk 5/10/17

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Date: 6/10/2017 9:14:00 AM
Barry you have done so well with this one. I love it. Congratulations :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/11/2017 2:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi. This is one of my favorite paintings so I was pleased to write for it. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 8:28:00 PM
Wonderful choice and a masterpiece of such mystery and profound beauty ... you have done the painting and the artist honor with this superb poem, and a well-deserved placement. Congrats - a seven for sure!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/26/2017 2:33:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 7:58:00 PM
You captured her capricious dreamy nature with your well-chosen words Barry! Congratulations on your fine second placement! 7 ; )
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/26/2017 2:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Connie. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 5:07:00 PM
Lovely interpretation of the painting, Barry. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. 7 Sandra
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/26/2017 2:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 8:31:00 AM
Hi Barry, I enjoyed reading this excellent write! Congratulations on your well-deserved win and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/25/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 7:40:00 AM
I especially loved the last 2 lines! I looked up the painting. Thank you for drawing attention to this lovely "Mona Lisa" :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/25/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thank you again, Kim for my win and for an interesting Contest. // Barry
Date: 5/25/2017 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Barry, excellent choice of artist and painting, your poem is spot on, I really like this thought provoking painting also. :))
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/26/2017 2:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Roy. // Barry
Date: 5/24/2017 11:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Indeed, our PS art gallery is divine! I will return to comment on your individual poem. Blessings...Kim
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/25/2017 5:46:00 AM
Thank you very much for my win, Kim. This is my favorite picture and I was pleased for the prompt to write for it. // Barry.
Date: 5/16/2017 12:52:00 PM
You have captured the essence of the painting within your poem, and shared its enigmatic beauty with the reader in crystal clarity. Emile. #7
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/16/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for your comment, Emile, and for the #7. It is a painting that has fascinated me for a long time. // Barry
Date: 5/15/2017 1:23:00 AM
I love that painting, I know exactly which one you mean without having to see it. Your description is spot on and that is wonderful. Good luck in the contest!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/15/2017 7:39:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, Darren. This is my favorite Rembrandt painting; have seen it 'in the flesh' at the Picture Gallery. // Barry
Date: 5/10/2017 1:05:00 PM
A 7 for sure, Barry--great poem! Janice
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/10/2017 1:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. // Barry

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