Girl At a Window

Girl at a Window

       Young girl at a window where do you stare,
       What is it that fascinates you so much?
       You smile a little, for whom do you look;
       Whose are those beads your fingers touch?
       Are they a gift, a token from another,
       Is it he for whom you look, in the street
       More enigmatic than Mona Lisa?
       Is there some person you wait to greet?

       What interests you as time goes by
       Leaning, patient over the window sill,
       Have you been there, watching, for long and
       Will you wait with such attention until
       He glances up from the throng beneath?
       Pausing when he sees you gazing there,
       Red sunlit ringlets and rose blushed cheeks.
       And does he recognize the beads you wear?

       From the painting ‘Girl at a Window’ by
       Rembrandt van Rijn, 1645.

This painting now hangs in the Dulwich Picture Gallery, London, U.K.
       http://www.dulwitchpicturegalley.org.uk

         5/10/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Barry you have done so well with this one. I love it. Congratulations :)
Stebbings Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 2:59 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi. This is one of my favorite paintings so I was pleased to write for it. // Barry
Barden Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Wonderful choice and a masterpiece of such mystery and profound beauty ... you have done the painting and the artist honor with this superb poem, and a well-deserved placement. Congrats - a seven for sure!
Stebbings Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:33 AM
Thank you very much, Greg. // Barry
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 7:58 PM
You captured her capricious dreamy nature with your well-chosen words Barry! Congratulations on your fine second placement! 7 ; )
Stebbings Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:32 AM
Thank you very much, Connie. // Barry
Haight Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:07 PM
Lovely interpretation of the painting, Barry. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. 7 Sandra
Stebbings Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:31 AM
Thank you very much, Sandra. // Barry
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May 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Hi Barry, I enjoyed reading this excellent write! Congratulations on your well-deserved win and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
Stebbings Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 1:18 PM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 7:40 AM
I especially loved the last 2 lines! I looked up the painting. Thank you for drawing attention to this lovely "Mona Lisa" :)
Stebbings Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Thank you again, Kim for my win and for an interesting Contest. // Barry
Pett Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Barry, excellent choice of artist and painting, your poem is spot on, I really like this thought provoking painting also. :))
Stebbings Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 2:34 AM
Thank you very much, Roy. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:56 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Indeed, our PS art gallery is divine! I will return to comment on your individual poem. Blessings...Kim
Stebbings Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:46 AM
Thank you very much for my win, Kim. This is my favorite picture and I was pleased for the prompt to write for it. // Barry.
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 12:52 PM
You have captured the essence of the painting within your poem, and shared its enigmatic beauty with the reader in crystal clarity. Emile. #7
Stebbings Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you very much for your comment, Emile, and for the #7. It is a painting that has fascinated me for a long time. // Barry
White Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 1:23 AM
I love that painting, I know exactly which one you mean without having to see it. Your description is spot on and that is wonderful. Good luck in the contest!
Stebbings Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Thank you for your appreciation, Darren. This is my favorite Rembrandt painting; have seen it 'in the flesh' at the Picture Gallery. // Barry
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May 10, 2017 at 1:05 PM
A 7 for sure, Barry--great poem! Janice
Stebbings Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Thank you very much, Janice. // Barry
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