Girl, Interrupted

Girl, Interrupted-

Deep cuts from within.
She faced bravely the many hardships of womanly life
How did she end up like this?
Severe depression after her first mental breakdown
Sorrow oppressed what was willed
At present in the parallel universe, 
Never aware of the world left behind
She will catch a brief glimpse of this world
   ---where everything is different.

Losing the veil in which includes time, 
Aging without caring death awaits!
Her different personality replaces reality
Things appear normal in her eyes. 

Although captivate in her own mind,
She feels this is freedom.

Being heavily burdened--
Every day she stares into different mirrors,
Smiling in her bipolar face
Without knowing insanity put her mind at ease.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 10/4/2016 8:48:00 PM
Ahh good ol mental write
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Date: 8/6/2016 5:46:00 AM
Beautifully written - thanks for sharing. Congrats on your win! Jesse
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Date: 8/5/2016 4:18:00 PM
Such a powerful pen Skat congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/5/2016 12:38:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet
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Date: 8/5/2016 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, sweet girl. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/27/2016 4:39:00 PM
Nice, I enjoyed this piece as your others I have been reading :)
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:09:00 AM
So enjoyable to read this piece again.
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Date: 10/20/2015 8:07:00 AM
Sometimes it's difficult to traverse the maze that naturally exists inside our mind, so we cut through the walls and hedges to make a new path, while leaving those waiting for us at the end wondering where we are. lovely write, SKAT.
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Date: 10/11/2015 7:05:00 PM
I love this, it really hits home for me. This is truly amazing. I absolutely love the flow you carry in your writings. Really inspiring. :) -LU
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Date: 10/7/2015 2:57:00 AM
Wow. so well written and insitive.. I feel o sorry for such people. Well done. Pete. .
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Date: 9/19/2015 3:30:00 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you for the warm welcome. There's nothing much I can say about myself but I'm Melisha and I'm 15. This poem was such a deep, dark one. One of my faves probably
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Date: 8/11/2015 1:44:00 PM
Loved Girl Interrupted and Sybil with Sally Field. Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/26/2015 1:15:00 PM
SKAT.. many congrats on this wonderful winner in the Gals Only contest!
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Date: 7/16/2015 8:44:00 PM
An intriguing look at mental illness. Great write, Skat! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/15/2015 9:07:00 AM
So glad to see this on the winners list, one of my personal favorites.
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:26:00 AM
This was always a favorite of mine - congratulations on you great win! Warmest regards, Pandita.
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Kelly... :)
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:16:00 PM
I bet this makes many feel less alone... Great poem! Congrats SKAT!
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Date: 7/14/2015 9:36:00 PM
This is one of my favorite poems that you've written, Skat. Brilliant work!... Thank you for participating in my contest. Congrats on the win!
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:19:00 PM
Well worth rereading!
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Date: 5/15/2015 1:38:00 PM
Isn't it beautiful the moment you can use the relentlessness of being one of the insane- but not safe from all the corruption either?
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Date: 3/16/2015 10:20:00 AM
Really well done. did you write it after reading the book? watching the movie? Or was it just a title that fit? either way, really good.
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Date: 2/22/2015 2:47:00 AM
Pouring such emotions in your work. That's quite something. But in a poet's perspective, it is really on how he/she can express those overflowing feelings within us. Our work is our signature, our very own reflection of ourselve, that's who we are
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Date: 1/29/2015 6:23:00 AM
I love reading your poem. You inspire me.
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:30:00 PM
This hits close to home, your work remains among my favourites. I hope continue to find inspiration and stay strong. xoxoxoxoxo.
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