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Rows and Rows of gravestones - Picture of Groesbeek Canadian War ...

Gifts From God

Her tears lost to rain ...
Dorothea stood in the cold mist,
her habit soaked through, though she cared not.
The gray markers spread out before her like stone soldiers at attention,
as if she were a commander of the dead ...
'No', he would have corrected, 'You are my gift from God' -
her soldier, as cold as stone, now long dead,
deep in the frozen earth at her feet.
She ached for his touch ...
it had been twenty-two years since he'd left for the war -
since he'd been killed protecting his platoon,
yet the wound was as raw as ever,
and the longing for his smile burned a hole in her deepest being.
God was the only thing that made it bearable,
and that devotion was for his sake alone, not hers -
not the children she tended to at the abbey,
not the twisted-limbed gentlemen at the veteran's center,
not the numberless parishioners she had comforted over the years,
not the long lines of homeless at the shelter,
not even the family members she loved and missed back home,
but his ... and his alone.
She read the gravestone aloud,
as she had done so many times before:
"Lieutenant Theodore James Crowley, Jr"
Theodore ... Gift From God, she thought to herself ...
Though she hadn't known it then, it was what her name meant, too ...
almost as if it had been planned, somehow ...
as if it was ordained by the heavens ...
almost as if God had created them ... for each other.
Which, of course ... He had.






N/A'd May 27, 2020, 4:05 AM
In the "Nun" Poetry Contest

N/A'd June 5, 2020, 11:24 PM
In the "Select 5, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest

~ 3rd Place ~  in the "N/A Re-Run 7" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 1:45 AM
I love the sublime expressions in every poem of yours, especially the layered perceptions. This is gorgeous. Congratulations on a well-deserved win Greg :)
Barden Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:36 AM
That's such a nice thing to say, Aditi, and I thank you so much for noticing the layers ... that is an important element for me, and I so appreciate others who appreciate that! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Kauffman Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Congrats, kudos and high fives. Knew this was special when I first read it. Congratulations on your first place win!
Barden Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Many thanks to you, Sam, you must be my lucky charm! Blessings, my friend! :o)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem/story and picture. Enjoy your win and day..................
Barden Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:32 AM
That's very kind of you, Paula, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Watt Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:50 AM
Nice to see some overdue credit for this tear-inducing tale. Well told and compelling, my friend ~ John
Barden Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:09 AM
That's very kind of you, John, thanks so much, Bud! :o)
Kauffman Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Gregory - a story of unforgettable grief and irony - definitely a Dorothy - Theodore story. So many people don't know the two names, in reverse order, mean the same thing - gift of God. Sometime I will tell you my Theodore story.
Barden Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:09 AM
Yes, indeed! And almost the same letters/phonetics - thank you for noticing and appreciating that bit, and for commenting, my good friend - blessings! (I want to hear that story!) :o)
Mcgee Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:18 PM
Gregory, this passionate piece of yours brings goosebumps. A magnificent write of loss and pain. Definitely deserving of 1st.
Barden Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:07 AM
That's very kind of you, Jeanne, and I greatly appreciate it! Blessings! :o) <3
Drowley Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 11:44 AM
'Greg, Congratulations on another well-penned write! Persistent faith pays off! Matthew 19:30 "But many that are first shall be last; and the last shall be first." David'
Barden Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:34 AM
Thank you so very much, David, I greatly appreciate it - and one of my favorite passages! Blessings to you, my friend! :o) <3
Awtry Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:30 AM
A moving story told beautifully! Congratulations :)
Barden Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:07 AM
Many thanks to you, PS! :o) <3
Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Wow G, this got an N/A? Well here you go, a little vindication, of course first place where it belongs, you were smart to enter this one you knew how much I loved it!
Barden Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:06 AM
Thank you so much, John, that means a lot - I felt this deserved a bit better placement than the trash bin, and I'm happy you saw it that way, too, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2020 at 5:10 AM
moving piece...urgent soup mail for you
Barden Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 1:05 AM
Thank you so much, Nette.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 11:04 PM
Wow, Greg! Your poem tells a beautiful, poignant story. I'm sure I'll see it at the top of the winner's list. It's a fave for me :) xx Rhonda
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 8:49 PM
Oh, that makes my day, Rhonda, and I thank you so much! It did not place, (not what the judge was looking for, I guess), but your comment and the ones below are my TRUE prize! Blessings and thanks to you, my friend! :o) <3
Hamilton Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 9:26 PM
What a touching write, I like this side of you G, a deft knack for telling a story you have, but not just a story Her story you speak in such a personal way...very touching how you add the subtle details that makes this a compelling read.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 8:47 PM
That's very kind of you, John, and I thank you so much for the comments! Blessings! :o)
Michael Avatar
May 26, 2020 at 8:09 AM
A lovely write
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 8:47 PM
Thanks, Arturo! :o)
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