Ghosts of the Titanic

The last few agonizing moments aboard the ill-fated Titanic,
Were no doubt filled with horror and unabated panic.
She slipped 'neath the waves to settle on the floor of the sea,
To create a watery grave for 1500 souls who rest for all eternity.

I dreamed that I descended to her resting place 13000 feet below,
Where eternal darkness reigns and deadly currents ebb and flow.
As I neared her eerie hulk I felt that I trod on hallowed ground,
Taking care not to step on the many personal items lying around.

There were many poignant reminders of life on that cluttered floor;
Ladies shoes, leather caps, crystal wear, china and so much more.
I saw the two massive outboard propellers in the distant gloom,
And the towering mast lay upon the deck where it met its doom.

I entered her interior and viewed the once magnificent dining room.
Remains of fine china and silverware were scattered in the eerie tomb,
Reminders of exquisite dining by the beau monde on her maiden cruise,
And nearby the beautiful reception room where the elite met to schmooze.

I awoke from my dream with a start and later upon reflection,
Mused upon the 'unsinkable Titanic' and man's strive for perfection,
And concluded when man in his foolish pride doth egotistically exclaim
That his schemes and follies are indestructible, he is doomed to shame!

Entry for Rob Carmack's "Dreams Contest"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 30, 2015 at 6:39 PM
HI BOB. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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April 28, 2015 at 2:26 PM
Bob H :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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April 26, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Bob H, one of the most interesting topic's. I don't know about this contest. However, I am wishing you the best. It's a stunning entry. Love LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 4:51 PM
impressive attention to details and a smooth segue to a dream-like stage, bob.. i enjoyed reading this splendid piece quite different from your humorous ones.. huggs
Bauer Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 3:19 PM
this is amazing, bob! you've captured so much emotion here with beautiful descriptions and gorgeous rhyme. the ending is just perfect! i love this one...
Das Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 5:33 AM
Wow what a beauty you penned. My prediction is that this will be the winner. A#7
Ackerson Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:26 PM
Great dreaming, Robert! Beautiful imagery...
Gorelick Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 10:06 PM
What the heck have you been eating lately( or drinking...lol) you are on a roll. This is awesome and wonder when you had this dream..after seeing the movie? BG
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April 22, 2015 at 1:44 PM
Thank you, BeeGee! I just finished reading a book full of fotos taken of the Titanic & that sparked the idea for the write. A few years ago we also saw a traveling exhibit of a bunch of artifacts retrieved from the ship in Denver. Take care.
Hopper Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 9:57 PM
Excellent write! Perfect! A 7 from me!
Laurie Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 8:37 PM
G'day Robert... a welcome reminder Robert that nothing built by man is indestructible. Your dream is the reality and you have penned it well - Lindsay
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