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Ghosts In November Skies

what’s unsaid lingers clouds words rustle leaves before they fall this is the story this morning I walk through a collage of reds and yellows on a hill I remember an old love a verse it lives running through my veins I remember summer of how we talked after I came in the rain I remember the morning I knew she was gone I remember I knew she was gone the morning I remember the rain after I came in of how we talked I remember summer running through my veins a verse it lives an old love I remember on a hill of reds and yellows through a collage I walk this is the story before they fall words rustle leaves lingers clouds what’s unsaid

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Date: 11/1/2021 10:54:00 AM
Those repeating lines add beauty to this well expressed emotions of a lost love...Enjoyed reading Mike...God bless...~Ani
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Date: 10/26/2021 1:20:00 PM
Hi Mike, loving and losing, beautifully expressed. Interesting style, repeating lines that punctuate the impact! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/25/2021 4:15:00 PM
summer running through my veins. I really loved that part. You are so good at these mirror style poems, Mike.
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Date: 10/21/2021 7:18:00 AM
I liked your poem, love lost appeals much to me.
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