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Ghostly Figures Roundel

the ghostly figures plea is to attend the mantel of life, to be and to see if they are forgiven, needing a friend, the ghostly figures plea. heavy hearted, weary to be set free. moonlight filters many shapes to amend, listening to Satan, not meant to be. these figures once had a garden to tend, ignoring the warning ate of the tree, now evicted, their souls can not prehend the ghostly figures plea.

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/14/2013 5:48:00 AM

Awesome! Congrats on your win in the challenge.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:00:00 PM

Thank you A.O. For commenting ...Seren.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 10:34:00 PM

Seren, CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win. Take care and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:01:00 PM

Thank you P.D. ,...Seren

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 5/11/2013 5:39:00 PM

An outstanding win on this difficult form. Well done, Seren. :-)

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:03:00 PM

Was a shock to me to get a placement ...thnks for commenting .....Seren

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/11/2013 12:59:00 PM

Seren I love your take on this prompt. An excellent Roundel. Congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thank you Connie for your comments ...Seren

Judy Konos

Date: 5/11/2013 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:04:00 PM

Thanks Judy ....Seren

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2013 8:34:00 AM

congrats on your win Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:06:00 PM

Hi Joseph , thanks for stopping and commenting ...Seren

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/11/2013 1:18:00 AM

Congratulations Seren, You have done really well with your first Roundel. I like the mood of contrition in this. Hugs, SuZ

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/14/2013 11:07:00 PM

Lol might be my last one as well, so difficult ...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 10:15:00 AM

i liked the second stanza Seren, enjoyed this one.. always ~p.d.~

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/10/2013 10:19:00 AM

thank you PD...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/10/2013 8:22:00 AM

This is a perfect entry into the contest! I had written a Roundel that isn't based on her topic for the contest, because I needed to try it out! I hope I can write one as good as yours here! You really did this form very nicely! I enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! Quite the masterful piece, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/10/2013 9:12:00 AM

Russell didnt have a clue wht I should be doing, just read Suzanne and hoped....Seren

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/10/2013 8:19:00 AM

This was very deep. I loved the atmospheric tone here. Very well done!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/10/2013 9:11:00 AM

Thanks Drake my first attempt.... Seren