Ghostin' White

The wind chases dry snow swirls, slips, and sleds, entranced ghost dancing the pavement.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/27/2009 10:46:00 AM

wow you are one sharp "pink Flamingo" Dane you're the only one to get the "tornado" illusion! yup.. a real smartie pants!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2009 4:21:00 AM

Wow, Deborah, I never thought about "snow funnels" They must be like "mini-tornadoes" picking up snow and swirling instead of taking sand and litter for a twirl. It must be a beautiful sight. Thanks for the image. Love to you. Dane Ann

Sara Lokken

Date: 12/26/2009 1:11:00 PM

This is beautiful! I can imagine it....I think it's going to be me someday, lol. Love, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2009 3:57:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/21/2009 3:24:00 PM

Deborah~A cute Haiku love the description of a winter storm ! Love Laura :) Merry Christmas!

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/21/2009 2:49:00 PM

Makes me want to be there!!! Hey, Miss Guzzi...did you get buried by the big storm!! Would love to see all that snow!! Hope it's not too hard to navigate today! Stay safe!! Merry Christmas!!

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/21/2009 2:06:00 PM

Nice Haiku you have here... gotta love that Ghostin white...Well done...Taz