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Written on November 15, 2023

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Light shivers in shadows breathless phantom haunts

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Date: 11/20/2023 2:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful Lanterne in Joseph May's contest, Gina :) - hugs
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Date: 11/18/2023 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning Lanterne!! Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/18/2023 2:11:00 AM
Well deserved win dear gina, congratulations . Loved this
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Date: 11/18/2023 1:15:00 AM
How ghostly good. Poor lost soul.
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Date: 11/17/2023 7:35:00 PM
beautiful
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Date: 11/17/2023 7:10:00 PM
A ghostly image, Wonderful write Gina, Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/15/2023 10:50:00 AM
- Kind of scary, Gina - Gl. in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/15/2023 6:06:00 AM
Hi Regina, I think you clearly depicted a lost soul in this poignant piece. The "light shivers in shadows" is brilliant dear, at least that was my personal perspective. We know they are seeking the light and we can only pray that they find it.
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Date: 11/15/2023 12:19:00 AM
This is such a deep dark and brilliant lanterne. I love “ light shivers in the dark” how creative is that. Absolutely stunning how you can convey so much in few syllables too. Impressive dear gina. Keep shining always
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