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Eyeless, forehead-less amoebae-like dull cloud piece, Resembling, other times, a mermaid in white fleece; Silly soul! Yet, engendering panic just like, The Satan? Beelzebub? It spins my psyche...! Chemicals of stories heard seep into my mind, Sensory organs stand erect, to fear, resigned; When the moody mind molds it into a monster, Personality proves paranoid-prone poker...! I used to find one in the neighboring forest, Betwixt barks of trees it cooed as though chorused; Midst tall-grown grassy bushes it leisurely strolls, With the breezes, winds, storms, gales, and doldrums it scrolls...! Ghost has been growing up within my flesh and blood, In my thoughts and feelings and actions, it flings mud; Though the concept of ghosts is a mere illusion, Is my mind ready to get rid of its fusion...??? 22 February 2023 Writing Challenge - G Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/2/2023 12:06:00 AM
Christuraj, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - G Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/25/2023 11:23:00 AM
- Ghosts are an exciting topic ... great writing - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/25/2023 6:30:00 AM
Vividly descriptive and creative piece, Christuraj! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/25/2023 1:37:00 AM
A nice poem on ghosts. I mostly love the line, "personality proves paranoid-prone poker". Congratulations!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/24/2023 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:17:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/24/2023 3:46:00 PM
Spooky ghost poem, Christuraj! :) I'm going to stick to the theory of nice ghosts! Congratulations!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/24/2023 7:42:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/24/2023 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative story/write. The mind is powerful for both good/bad. Keep it filled with good. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
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Date: 2/24/2023 1:01:00 PM
congratulations on your contest podium win, Alex. Your poem is so deserving of such recognition.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/24/2023 7:41:00 PM
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Date: 2/22/2023 3:24:00 AM
Good question, Christuraj:)
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Date: 2/22/2023 3:49:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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