Jan Allison Poet Couplet

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Ggrrrrr the Spider Has Returned

I prepare myself for a deep relaxing bath
but that dratted spider was out to have a laugh

As I pour scented bubble bath into the water
Spidey climbs the wall  - he’d also bought his daughter*!

He raises a spindly leg as if to wave hello
that pesky crawling spider really needs to go

It's a living a nightmare, it isn’t a dream
So I emit a very loud ear piercing scream

My heroic hubby dashes to my aid
as my distress was clearly displayed

Whilst I stand their screaming like a stupid bimbo
hubby tosses the weeny spider out the bathroom window 

Alas the daddy spider he has other plans
and wriggles his way out of hubby’s hands

Hubby drops the creepy critter onto the floor
spidey plans his escape, he's heading for the door

Hubby pounces on him at breakneck speed
and squashes him flat ... he’s dead indeed*


*A great deal of poetic licence – thankfully there was only one spider and he was tossed out of the Window* I think the warm weather is bringing these pesky spider’s out from hiding:-(

Follow up poem to www.poetrysoup.com/poem/i_confessed_to_a_cold_blooded_murder_1029155

6/9/18

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White Wolf June 10, 2018 at 5:01 AM Haha, loved it, Jan! Reminds me of our Redback spiders on the dunny seat! Highly venomous! But, beautiful! lol Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 5:38 AM Oh heck I would rather cr*p myself if that happened lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham June 10, 2018 at 2:12 AM Just read foreign office update , only essential travel to the I.O.M. , the island is on lockdown because of spider invasion. Stay safe Jan. Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 4:02 AM The little blighters are certainly visiting my bathroom - good job hubby is here or I would stink from lack of a bath lol:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso June 9, 2018 at 11:58 PM LOL loved this, of course not to be the bearer of bad news, the spiders 200 brothers and sisters are close by!!!!! :) Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 4:04 AM Thanks for cheering me up ... not :-( lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet June 9, 2018 at 10:21 PM Loved it, Jan. A perfect description of arachnophobia...lol...I hate the little devils myself. Faved!

Eve Roper June 9, 2018 at 8:15 PM Spiders , yuck, great write.. hugs eve Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 4:05 AM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong June 9, 2018 at 8:09 PM You sound like me Jan, calling for your husband's help when there's a critter in the house that needs capturing. Lol. I am not good with crawly creatures. A well written and entertaining poem Jan. I enjoyed it. : ) Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 4:06 AM Thank goodness they don't mind getting rid of them for us:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier June 9, 2018 at 7:46 PM Lovely poem, Jan. It certainly is spider season. LOL Jan Allison June 10, 2018 at 4:06 AM It certainly is Line:-( hugs jan xx

Pat Adams June 9, 2018 at 3:11 PM I like the sequel as well as the first!! I really don't mind spiders because they eat roaches, which I really hate! Orkin takes care of all the little pests around our home now! Great write!......Pat Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:42 PM I wish they would visit someone else I want to be able to have a bath and be free from the beasties lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2018 at 1:11 PM - I have cut bushes and trees today, Jan ... spiders, beetles and small flies all over me - Disgusting ... both inside and out - I can see this chaos in your bathroom :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:39 PM Thankfully my heroic hubby rescued this damsel in distress lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot June 9, 2018 at 12:37 PM Great couplets, but I'm bias, poor spiders, they actually do a lot of good around the house, eating lots of other things that really could bite and do you harm, in the dark when you can't see they'll be taking mosquitoes quite easily, along with loads of nasties, go on let the spiders run free, but out the window if you really must, peace of mind, reasons justified, its what I do to keep to my Mrs satisfied. hugs Mick Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:33 PM They do get rid of flies etc, just wish they would do it outside the house not in it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands June 9, 2018 at 12:35 PM Well written Jan. ! I enjoyed reading your story :) Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:32 PM Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael June 9, 2018 at 9:31 AM Nice write... it crawls my blood...but spiders would run away ... unlike cockroaches, they don't care what you do or say...All the best Jan Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:32 PM Yeuk... I've never seen a cockroach for real and would gladly get rid of that beastie if I ever came across one!:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux June 9, 2018 at 9:06 AM I can relate, I am often called to the rescue. A quick hi to say thanks for your visit. Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:31 PM Oh you are brave Rick!:-) hugs jan xx

Fauxcroft Wade June 9, 2018 at 8:49 AM Gripping and alarming tale of something that terrifies many, great story though of a damsel in distress, a White Knight hero and a happy ever after. Could anyone ask for more. Jan Allison June 9, 2018 at 4:30 PM I am so lucky hubby braved his way to save this damsel in distress lol:-) hugs jan xx