Getting in The Way

I am always trying
to put words into the mouth
of mornings, speak 
over the quiet that descends 
at dusk when the world
pauses to take a breath.

It is my voice I hear
echoing back in the wind
and my fears that crawl
the dark on those long nights.
I make the world
a reflection of me.

I seem to get in the way
and drown out with my own
noise whatever is there
deep in its silence, patiently
waiting for me to become quiet, 
to listen, hear what it has to say.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rose  Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Smile, ! how hard it is to listen over the sound of our own heart beat, our own stubborn voice, that never goes away, Well done dear Paul :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 4:57 AM
I know what you mean! I wrote a poem the other day, “Before I Ruin the View.” Hope you will check it out..similar thought.
Willason Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 6:06 AM
Hi Kim, Indeed your poem explores a similiar theme exceptionally well...the tension between the observer and the thing being observed...letting nature speak. Thankyou dear Kim for giving the poem your time....valued. Take care, Paul
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