Getting Back

Here’s to the young lad named TRUSTY,

back then the girls were quite BUSTY,

no wonder his thoughts were LUSTY.

Lately, that thinking’s getting DUSTY,

cause the joint(s) is/are getting RUSTY!

*For the Monorhyme contest using every rhyme I ever heard with my name growing up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/29/2010 7:02:00 AM
Good one John, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your success in contest, John. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/28/2010 4:02:00 PM
A play on your name. That's great. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:08:00 PM
Hey congrats on this!! Now If I have time I want to find some more of those narratives you did from titles! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/28/2010 1:02:00 PM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Getting old is sometimes the pits. Ha! Ha! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congrats John on your HM in the Monorhyme contest with this wonderful write deserving of this wonderful honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..have a great memorial day weekend...
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:10:00 AM
Enjoyed the humor, John. I'd rather be busy and surely would be a bit more lusty if I weren't so rusty. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:37:00 PM
Way to go, using your own name, I can't do anything with Andrea or Dietrich. But andy gives me a few. haha. THis was a delight! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 8:09:00 PM
Nicely written. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:03:00 PM
HAHA! Good one, John! Made me laugh. GL in the contest.
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