Getcha Kosher Dills Here!

Never been one much for food, always caused too much fear. “Geeeeez” would there be 
enough? Enough food was always a concern. I’d think of cold days when Dad was gone. Mom 
was crying and sled rides through the snow to grandmas where, maybe, there was venison. 
Didn’t like seeing the red, blue-black meat all smelly and sizzling in the pan. (The deer’s 
head was a porch wall!) Loved the golden butter and the onions. Gram would have potatoes 
always lots of them.
     I can’t ever remember wanting to feel full. When I was full if I ever got full “Wouldn’t 
someone else be empty?” I thought they might, so, I never tempted fate. I was a little bitty 
girl. I took bitty bites and wee tastes especially if it was yummy.
     There were and are things I love to taste, but I wouldn’t say eat. “Tastin’ now that’s the 
thing! Tastin’ doesn’t hurt no one. Don’t hurt them by eatin’ all theirs and don’t hurt you if it’s 
yucky” The bestest most happiest tastes, I can remember, are sour tastes “Go figure? “ I’m 
your kosher dill girl. I’m a prickle barrel surprise. My Jewish family Tanta and Uncle Don had 
the bestest pickles “Mmmmmmmm yummy!” What a crunchin’ delight and a pickle won’t fill 
you up either. A pickle will just make your mouth water and your tongue lick your lips. “If 
you have two pickles you ain’t eatin’ no ones supper either!” So I’d have ta say, “ Pickles is 
my food of joy crunchy, cold, half-sour, Jewish pickles given with love from my Uncle Donny.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/14/2010 5:59:00 PM
Mission accomplish! Love them pickles, D.G. thanks for reading my p.p.#2. My day would not have been complete without your comment. I am always looking foward for your comments with or with out the wine. They make me smile and say hmmm! Have your self a good night.
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Date: 4/12/2010 7:45:00 AM
I love the kosher dills and its a crunching delight for sure... you make we want to go get some.. yikes.. the deers head on the porch wall.. that would give this little girl nightmares.. great writing ...love constance
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:37:00 AM
TWO SOUP MAILS....
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Date: 4/11/2010 6:16:00 AM
Deborah, this is a priceless piece. I don't remember pickles, but I remember when I was 4 years old - Izzy Wolf - a big brother to me, took me with him everywhere - lived next door. The Wolfs would invite me in for carp and pumpernickel some mornings. I loved it. They had a big dipper that hung above the sink. thanks for the memories. Love, daver
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:33:00 PM
This is a cute poem. I'm afraid I never left anything on my plate for someone who was hungry. If I didn't eat it my brothers would. Thank you for having the contest and for my 3rd place. I was thrilled. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:30:00 PM
SOUP MAIL... URGENT..luv..
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Date: 4/10/2010 5:26:00 PM
Thankxxx Teach.. am washing my trooper uniform tomorrow... getting ready for your next challenge... u do have one in mind me thinks..luv.. Linda-Marie.. BBF ...
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Date: 4/10/2010 10:22:00 AM
Cool as a cucumber Debbie... the Blogs are not showing any of the information ..I saw u posted your Birds Contest results but it only shows headings and not the context... I just created headlines for blogs this morning so Soupers would contact Management to let them know about this problem.... enjoyed your creative write today..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/10/2010 7:36:00 AM
You would get along great with my hubby....sour pickles...ah yes!! He would rather have that for a snack than just about anything! I love this poem, and hopefully it is for the contest!! ?? Thanks Debbie for placing my poem in your "Animal speaks" contest...seems we all wrote about our feathered friends...Ha ha...I should have picked a mule!!! Thanks again!!
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Date: 4/10/2010 1:47:00 AM
Fine memories, Deb! - Loved the insight about not eating too much as a child...I'm a 'sour puss' too! My favorite? Apple cider vinegar!...Almost every vegetable I make gets a healthy dose!...Particularly any of the green-leaf variety (Ow, my aching jaws!) And home-made cole slaw? Oh yeah! - Tim
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:13:00 PM
Fine memories
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