Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Get That Winning Smile

If you're out on the town
Your date gives you a frown
'Cuz you smiled at the fellow
But your teeth were all yellow

Don't you wait one more night
Go and grab some "Crest Whites"
Makes your teeth white and clean
So your smile can be seen

Don't embarrass yourself
It's now on the store shelf
Get a smile that's brand new
And your date will thank you




May 25,2015

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Skat A July 19, 2015 at 2:46 PM Laura, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:52 PM Thank, Skat! Glad you liked it :)

Viv Wigley July 19, 2015 at 12:47 AM Sparkling write, Laura, congratulations, Viv Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:53 PM Thank you, Viv! It was a fun write :)

Eve Roper July 18, 2015 at 10:23 PM Congratulations on your win,Laura this is funny. Hugs Eve Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:54 PM Glad you liked it, Eve :)

Alexis Y. July 18, 2015 at 8:02 PM Laura, I'm glad to see this awesome jingle on the winners list. Congratulations! :-) Alexis Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:54 PM Thank you, Alexis! Glad you liked it, and it was fun to write, too :)

Tim Smith July 18, 2015 at 4:29 PM what a great jingle...tingled all the way to the top....congrats Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:55 PM Thanks very much, Tim! With your great sense of humor, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

Jan Allison July 18, 2015 at 1:41 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser July 19, 2015 at 3:55 PM Thanks very much, Jan :)

Alexis Y. May 26, 2015 at 5:43 PM Laura,This is nice jingle. Midway through I started to smile. Sometimes we forget the importance of a smile:) Alexis Laura Leiser May 26, 2015 at 7:26 PM Thanks for stopping by, Alexis. It was a fun write :)

Constance La France May 26, 2015 at 4:33 PM Laura , this is outstanding, so well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, hydro-licious Laura Leiser May 26, 2015 at 5:36 PM Thank you, Broken Wings, for your kind comment and rating, too! If always had "goofball" in me, ha :)

Paul Callus May 26, 2015 at 6:53 AM Impressive jingle, Laura!! Love the sparkle:) Now we can all afford to smile! // paul Paul Callus May 26, 2015 at 2:09 PM :) You got it right! Laura Leiser May 26, 2015 at 11:28 AM I think it's spelled, ditties?! Laura Leiser May 26, 2015 at 10:43 AM Thanks, Paul! My dad would always be singing little "diddies" similar to this as I was growing up...comes naturally to me, ha! :)

Skat A May 25, 2015 at 9:13 PM enjoyed your write.. *always, S.K.A.T.* Laura Leiser May 25, 2015 at 11:48 PM Thanks again for your kind comments, Skat :)

Seren Roberts May 25, 2015 at 5:56 PM Loved it I did a toothpaste one as well but a short one.....Seren Laura Leiser May 25, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thanks, Seren! Good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison May 25, 2015 at 5:33 PM made me smile Laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Laura Leiser May 25, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thanks, Jan!