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Get Stripping - Bawdy Limerick

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My auntie acted on the stage Her performance was in a cage She dressed as a stripper Then let men folk whip her Her antics sure caused an outrage! FICTION POEM 9/29/18

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/4/2018 1:58:00 AM

I dunno why Jan. Some men pay big money for this entertainment - and some buy a seasons ticket - thanks for the giggle Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2018 8:03:00 AM

lol Linday:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 10/3/2018 7:22:00 AM

Wow. Wish I had an auntie like that! Well done!......pat

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2018 7:29:00 AM

I bet she would have been fun shame its my imagination lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/1/2018 8:10:00 PM

A nice concise meter in this limerick, Jan. A fun read. Thanks for stopping by. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thanks maurice i have come a long way since i joined soup:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Gondolf

Date: 10/1/2018 7:22:00 AM

I enjoyed this bit of humor this morning, Jan, great fun. John

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2018 3:56:00 PM

Thanks John I loved your poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/30/2018 8:12:00 PM

There is always truth to be found somewhere in fiction. Sounds like a Supreme Court bachelor party.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2018 3:55:00 PM

ha ha ha you should do a poem about that lol:-) hugs Jan x

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/30/2018 4:44:00 PM

ha ha that is a good one Jan. enjoyed. love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thanks Phyl:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/30/2018 3:07:00 PM

ha! very cute one, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, i think my muse has finally returned. We have been away on 2 short breaks but I think my muse has been on a month long holiday:-( hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/30/2018 2:35:00 PM

That' one lively aunt! Well penned.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2018 3:26:00 PM

Oh it would have been awesome to have one like this lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/30/2018 8:24:00 AM

Too bad this was fictional Jan!!! I was going to ask if the tradition carried forward! Great fun as usual xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2018 12:56:00 PM

It sure wouldn't be carried on by me lol!! Was worried it may be a little risque but the comments have been positive and limericks are allowed to be bawdy:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 9/30/2018 7:08:00 AM

Today women wear less, show more and get mad when men look.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2018 12:55:00 PM

lol John that is so true!:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/30/2018 12:55:00 AM

Yikes, I am sure not into the wild side. I got spanked enough as a child! I would bid a hasty retreat! I do enjoy watching the old burlesque movies where you can't see much but feathers as in your photo. Fun limerick Jan. : )

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2018 4:09:00 AM

I never know what my muse will come up with - now she is back shes being rather playful lol, I have scraps of paper all over my table with several half finished poems on them, I have to write them down straight away or I forget :-) hugs jan xx