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Get Romantic

swept her off her feet as he whispered in her ear will you marry me? -------------------------------- Inspired by Andrea's contest Visual 4

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Skat A

Date: 12/3/2015 1:11:00 AM

Paul, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT

Paul Callus
Date: 12/5/2015 6:06:00 PM

Pleased you liked it, Skat:) Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Emmanuel Brian Oule

Date: 3/25/2015 10:32:00 AM

Well written, so romantic it's i love the pictures

Emmanuel Brian Oule
Date: 3/26/2015 5:11:00 AM

Welcome Paul, you too the best, but all the best comes when as friends support each other Good to have you friend

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2015 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Bryan; nice to have you stopping by. All the best. // paul

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 3/16/2015 3:55:00 PM

Oh so utterly romantic indeed. Plain and simple, and to the point, I love haiku. This one is sweet.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2015 4:44:00 PM

I am glad that you enjoyed my romantic haiku, Iris. Thank you...like your bubbly comments! // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2015 2:16:00 PM

Ah, if only to be swept off my feet again! What a wonderful verse, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 3/14/2015 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn! I am sure you have experienced this great feeling of being swept off your feet:) You are a sweet and lovely person, and do merit a repeat performance! Love & Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2015 6:14:00 PM

ok, thanks for letting me know. I just read your reply down here. My short term memory is way too short!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 6:19:00 PM

I'm pleased to know that it's not just my memory that plays tricks on me:) // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/11/2015 3:30:00 PM

short and sweet Paul... nad

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 6:06:00 PM

Thank you Nadiya! short and sweet is more than lovely!:) // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 3:00:00 PM

AAww, I hope the answer was yes! :) This was super sweet Paul Hugxxx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 6:08:00 PM

Yes, Casarah, for romantic reasons it must be a yes!! Thank you for the lovely comments. hugs // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/11/2015 5:54:00 AM

Very nice pen Paul! Enjoyed your romantic haiku, dear friend. A 7 from me! GL in the contest! Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Dorian; glad you enjoyed. It's not for the contest, but still appreciate your nice wishes:) All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2015 6:30:00 PM

It wasn't in my contest, was it? I don't recall it. Sweet!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/11/2015 2:08:00 PM

No, Andrea....the one in the contest was "Last Tango"; the same visual later inspired this one. Thanks for the 'like'. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2015 6:35:00 PM

This tells a large story very succinctly!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 12:37:00 PM

Your few words always manage to say a lot, Richard! Thank you. // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/9/2015 12:28:00 PM

awhhh, i am taken by this sweet whisper of commitment, paul... sigh; beautiful.. huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 12:36:00 PM

Thank you Nette! Lovely comment...and that 'sigh' says it all:) Hugs // paul

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/9/2015 10:37:00 AM

Well there is nothing more romantic than that. Nice flow of words attracting the reader, creating a message that floats above the words reinforced by the explicit imagery. Emile. #7

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 12:35:00 PM

Lovely comments, as usual, Emile. Thank you! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2015 7:44:00 AM

- A very sweet Haiku,Paul :) - Good luck in the contest! - I wish you a lovely new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 12:02:00 PM

Glad that you enjoyed it Anne Lise! This one is not for a contest, but was inspired by Andrea's visual 4. Hope you are coping with life! All the best. hugs /x/ paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/8/2015 3:50:00 PM

Dear Paul Thanks for the read and respond on my jelly beans, and just a reminder don't forget what JELLY BEANS, CHERI well you ask me to remind you to put it on your list, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thank you dear Cherl:) Those jelly beans are on the list...on the fridge door! There's lots to buy for Easter. In Malta we make a special 'sweet' for Easter...it's called a "Figolla". // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/8/2015 3:47:00 PM

Dear Paul, What a sweet romantic poem here my romancing fellow, I hope she said yes, nicely expressed it was a wonderful poem of warmth and devotion, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 3/10/2015 11:55:00 AM

Glad you found this sweet and romantic, Cherl! Thank you....and I am sure she said yes:) // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/8/2015 1:29:00 PM

Thanks Paul for catching my spelling error in the title! HUGS! Light & Love

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 1:58:00 PM

Hi Debbie! It was only a typo:) Hugs ... paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 1:20:00 PM

Ha, I knew it.. I was just checking. hehehe. Paul, haven't left my grandson side. But, tomorrow I have to go back home. Which is 4 hours away :(... Wish I could take him with me. Love LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 1:56:00 PM

You'll miss him:( 4 hours is a long way away! We're lucky in Malta that we are close to each other, while knowing how and when to keep our distance. Hugs ... paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:02:00 AM

Good morning Paul, thank you for the sweet reply. Yes it's baby Zachary. The light of my morning... HUGS..LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thought as much:) I am sure Zach will give you much pleasure! Ohhh...that's why I wrote Royal with a Capital 'R' :) hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/8/2015 8:37:00 AM

Very nice romantic interpretation of that visual, Paul. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 9:55:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Sandra! Thank you for stopping by. // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/8/2015 5:49:00 AM

Very romantic touch. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 10:05:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Ravi. All the best. // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 5:13:00 AM

OO, is this like Richard's Questionku? I like it a lot Paul. Even though, I'm afraid of marriage. So sweet... Love LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 3/8/2015 10:08:00 AM

Hi Linda:) Yes...it's quite similar to a Questionku. Can't blame you...too many marriages break up nowadays! But with the right person, you can make it work:) Love the avatar...must be baby Zak! /x/ paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/7/2015 4:00:00 PM

:) :) Lovely, Paul. Romantic is sweet...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 4:26:00 PM

Thanks Eileen!! Romantic is sweet....passionate even sweeter! hugs // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/7/2015 3:39:00 PM

Oh this is sweet Paul and so romantic : )

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 4:23:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, Charm:) Long way to go to match your lovely romantic writes!! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:37:00 PM

Ohhhh this would have done so well in the contest Paul - I hope she said Yes! Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/7/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Jan:) My first entry was a mad dash; this one came as I was quietly eating pizza at the airport restaurant. The other was sad...this one the opposite!! She must have said YES! Hugs // paul