Francine Roberts Poet Rhyme

Get Outta My Pond

~~~ Get Outta My Pond ! ~~~

Do not invade my space!
Can you not tell by the look on my face?
No pictures please! Yes, I'm a party pooper.
Just what would you expect from a grouper?
Get that camera away from me
Or you WILL be sorry, just wait and see.
I don't come to your office and stare at you
So get out of my ocean! Nothing less will do.



for Carolyn's "Attack" contest

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Elizabeth Wesley June 6, 2011 at 8:39 AM Nice to read, enjoy the style. Keep up the good work

Gautami Phookan June 6, 2011 at 6:07 AM A fantastic take on the pic, especially loved the last two lines..A big congrats Francine on your win in this contest..love, gautami

John Freeman June 5, 2011 at 7:21 AM Francine, great to see you in the top spot. Congratulations on your honored placement Souper! Agape, Moses

Mike Dailey June 5, 2011 at 5:02 AM I think you captured that fish's thoughts well. MIke

James Fraser June 4, 2011 at 3:19 PM Many congrats Francine on your win in Carolyn's contest with this funny poem. Have a wonderful weekend :)

Joe Maverick June 4, 2011 at 12:08 PM An original write here Francine, great result in the win!

Barbara Gorelick June 4, 2011 at 11:11 AM This is one of my favorites..what a fun contest..congrats to you on your great poem..BG

Joseph Osita June 4, 2011 at 3:46 AM congrats on your 1st place win in Carolyn's contest

Jack Horne June 3, 2011 at 11:12 PM LOL, Congratulations on all your wins : )

Delysia Hendricks June 3, 2011 at 8:46 PM hahaha. Good one, Francine. Congratulations on your awesome win in Carolyn's contest. Well-deserved!! :))

Robert A. Dufresne June 3, 2011 at 8:37 PM enjoyed your take on the contest, Francine. great imaginative write. Congratulations to you on such a fine win!

Sara Kendrick June 3, 2011 at 4:31 PM Enjoyed..Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta June 3, 2011 at 2:55 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carolyn, Francine

Carol Sunshine Brown June 3, 2011 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Francine. Love Carol

Carolyn Devonshire June 3, 2011 at 1:18 PM :) What happened to that famous Canadian hospitality, Francine? Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson June 3, 2011 at 12:48 PM Great win Francine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Joe Flach June 3, 2011 at 12:39 PM Good one Francine. Plays off of the photo well. Joe

Don Johnson May 21, 2011 at 10:26 PM Great poetry do I see, yes we stay away from thee :) us dumbly dum no hopers, xo Don

Barbara Gorelick May 21, 2011 at 4:52 PM Great one!...shes going to love it. BG