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Get Outta My Pond

~~~ Get Outta My Pond ! ~~~ Do not invade my space! Can you not tell by the look on my face? No pictures please! Yes, I'm a party pooper. Just what would you expect from a grouper? Get that camera away from me Or you WILL be sorry, just wait and see. I don't come to your office and stare at you So get out of my ocean! Nothing less will do. for Carolyn's "Attack" contest

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Date: 6/6/2011 8:39:00 AM
Nice to read, enjoy the style. Keep up the good work
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:07:00 AM
A fantastic take on the pic, especially loved the last two lines..A big congrats Francine on your win in this contest..love, gautami
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:21:00 AM
Francine, great to see you in the top spot. Congratulations on your honored placement Souper! Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:02:00 AM
I think you captured that fish's thoughts well. MIke
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:19:00 PM
Many congrats Francine on your win in Carolyn's contest with this funny poem. Have a wonderful weekend :)
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:08:00 PM
An original write here Francine, great result in the win!
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:11:00 AM
This is one of my favorites..what a fun contest..congrats to you on your great poem..BG
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:46:00 AM
congrats on your 1st place win in Carolyn's contest
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Date: 6/3/2011 11:12:00 PM
LOL, Congratulations on all your wins : )
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:46:00 PM
hahaha. Good one, Francine. Congratulations on your awesome win in Carolyn's contest. Well-deserved!! :))
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:37:00 PM
enjoyed your take on the contest, Francine. great imaginative write. Congratulations to you on such a fine win!
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:31:00 PM
Enjoyed..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of carolyn, Francine
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Francine. Love Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:18:00 PM
:) What happened to that famous Canadian hospitality, Francine? Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:48:00 PM
Great win Francine. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/3/2011 12:39:00 PM
Good one Francine. Plays off of the photo well. Joe
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Date: 5/21/2011 10:26:00 PM
Great poetry do I see, yes we stay away from thee :) us dumbly dum no hopers, xo Don
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:52:00 PM
Great one!...shes going to love it. BG
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