Eileen Manassian Poet Sonnet

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Get On My Cloud

Get on my cloud; it's soft and fluffy too
Lie down with me and let your heart just dream
Delightful treats I have in store for you
My sweets are lathered up in richest cream

Come float beyond the Earth and let us play
Our game of love as stars just blush and stare
Let's have some fun and ride the Milky Way
that spills its sweetness on our bodies bare

My cloud is soft and so is where you lie
your head is cushioned on my silky breast
In warmth of woolly white you hear me sigh
and now that love is done we sleep and rest

Get on my cloud and take a trip with me
I'm sure you'll name my cloud "Sweet Ecstasy"

Eileen

Inspired by Skat's Get Off My Cloud Contest
A different take

Cloud #9- One of my favorite songs by Brian Adams

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_cloud_number_9_inspired_by_bryan_adams_459426

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Funom Makama June 4, 2015 at 9:58 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Liam Mcdaid June 4, 2015 at 12:43 AM truly beautiful pen eileen wishing you a lovely day dear pal

Emile Pinet June 3, 2015 at 1:10 PM Hope, truth, fantasy and innocence lay silently within such words as these, waiting to be released by the magic of a poet's dream. Emile.

Constance La France June 1, 2015 at 1:40 PM Eileen, love the new username, and your cloud poem is delightful and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou Constance La France June 1, 2015 at 4:06 PM I like it ... sort of mysterious and the pic is lovely too!!! Eileen Manassian June 1, 2015 at 2:41 PM Oh...thanks, Constance. I'm not sure if I will keep it or not. I love the name Roya. It means "vision" in my language. Your poet is superb. It was my pleasure to read it. Hugs

Shane Cooper May 31, 2015 at 9:52 PM A lovely poem, if you lay down and gaze skyward look long enough you can see your dreams take shape in the clouds as they drift past. Such Ephemeral dreams. Eileen Manassian June 1, 2015 at 2:40 PM What a sweet post, Shane. You are a romantic at heart. Lovely! Thanks for the delightful visit. Hugs

Vera Duggan May 31, 2015 at 7:29 PM Eileen this is such a beautiful poem, sometimes I can be on cloud nine, by the way the avatar was 50 years ago next month, seems like a lifetime away now, take care..............Vera............ Eileen Manassian June 1, 2015 at 2:40 PM Lovely, dear. It's so lovely that your love has lasted all these years. Thank you for your kind and gracious visit, Vera. Hugs

Joseph May May 31, 2015 at 6:46 AM Your cloud seems fine it must be cloud nine....beautiful write Eileen Manassian May 31, 2015 at 7:45 AM Cloud nine is the best place to be, Joseph. :) Thanks for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2015 at 12:37 PM Indeed a different take. Lovely picture you got going with it too!! I likes it! Eileen Manassian May 31, 2015 at 5:46 AM Thanks, sweetie. That's Katie Perry.... She's done a cloud song, apparently. :) Hugs

Richard D Seal May 30, 2015 at 12:15 PM You just hang on up there my little Desert Orchid, while I get my chopper out and come and join you lol. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian May 31, 2015 at 5:47 AM Why Mr Seal....everyone knows that clouds are wispy and dreamy, ethereal and very delicate....I'm afraid the whir of your...chopper....might make the cloud thin out and I will simply fall through....Perhaps try getting to me in a hot air balloon. Thanks for the visit.

Tim Smith May 30, 2015 at 11:31 AM I like the softer side of the cloud Eileen...I prefer not to slam anyone. Eileen Manassian May 31, 2015 at 5:50 AM Yes, Tim. I can see that. :) Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs