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Get On My Cloud

Get on my cloud; it's soft and fluffy too
Lie down with me and let your heart just dream
Delightful treats I have in store for you
My sweets are lathered up in richest cream

Come float beyond the Earth and let us play
Our game of love as stars just blush and stare
Let's have some fun and ride the Milky Way
that spills its sweetness on our bodies bare

My cloud is soft and so is where you lie
your head is cushioned on my silky breast
In warmth of woolly white you hear me sigh
and now that love is done we sleep and rest

Get on my cloud and take a trip with me
I'm sure you'll name my cloud "Sweet Ecstasy"

Eileen

Inspired by Skat's Get Off My Cloud Contest
A different take

Cloud #9- One of my favorite songs by Brian Adams

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_cloud_number_9_inspired_by_bryan_adams_459426

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2015

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Funom Makama Date: 6/4/2015 9:58:00 AM What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 6/4/2015 12:43:00 AM truly beautiful pen eileen wishing you a lovely day dear pal Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 6/3/2015 1:10:00 PM Hope, truth, fantasy and innocence lay silently within such words as these, waiting to be released by the magic of a poet's dream. Emile. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/1/2015 1:40:00 PM Eileen, love the new username, and your cloud poem is delightful and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/1/2015 4:06:00 PM I like it ... sort of mysterious and the pic is lovely too!!! Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2015 2:41:00 PM Oh...thanks, Constance. I'm not sure if I will keep it or not. I love the name Roya. It means "vision" in my language. Your poet is superb. It was my pleasure to read it. Hugs

Shane Cooper Date: 5/31/2015 9:52:00 PM A lovely poem, if you lay down and gaze skyward look long enough you can see your dreams take shape in the clouds as they drift past. Such Ephemeral dreams. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2015 2:40:00 PM What a sweet post, Shane. You are a romantic at heart. Lovely! Thanks for the delightful visit. Hugs

Vera Duggan Date: 5/31/2015 7:29:00 PM Eileen this is such a beautiful poem, sometimes I can be on cloud nine, by the way the avatar was 50 years ago next month, seems like a lifetime away now, take care..............Vera............ Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 6/1/2015 2:40:00 PM Lovely, dear. It's so lovely that your love has lasted all these years. Thank you for your kind and gracious visit, Vera. Hugs

Joseph May Date: 5/31/2015 6:46:00 AM Your cloud seems fine it must be cloud nine....beautiful write Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/31/2015 7:45:00 AM Cloud nine is the best place to be, Joseph. :) Thanks for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/30/2015 12:37:00 PM Indeed a different take. Lovely picture you got going with it too!! I likes it! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/31/2015 5:46:00 AM Thanks, sweetie. That's Katie Perry.... She's done a cloud song, apparently. :) Hugs

Richard D Seal Date: 5/30/2015 12:15:00 PM You just hang on up there my little Desert Orchid, while I get my chopper out and come and join you lol. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/31/2015 5:47:00 AM Why Mr Seal....everyone knows that clouds are wispy and dreamy, ethereal and very delicate....I'm afraid the whir of your...chopper....might make the cloud thin out and I will simply fall through....Perhaps try getting to me in a hot air balloon. Thanks for the visit.

Tim Smith Date: 5/30/2015 11:31:00 AM I like the softer side of the cloud Eileen...I prefer not to slam anyone. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/31/2015 5:50:00 AM Yes, Tim. I can see that. :) Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs