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Get on my cloud; it's soft and fluffy too Lie down with me and let your heart just dream Delightful treats I have in store for you My sweets are lathered up in richest cream Come float beyond the Earth and let us play Our game of love as stars just blush and stare Let's have some fun and ride the Milky Way that spills its sweetness on our bodies bare My cloud is soft and so is where you lie your head is cushioned on my silky breast In warmth of woolly white you hear me sigh and now that love is done we sleep and rest Get on my cloud and take a trip with me I'm sure you'll name my cloud "Sweet Ecstasy" Eileen Inspired by Skat's Get Off My Cloud Contest A different take Cloud #9- One of my favorite songs by Brian Adams http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/my_cloud_number_9_inspired_by_bryan_adams_459426

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 9:58:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/4/2015 12:43:00 AM

truly beautiful pen eileen wishing you a lovely day dear pal

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/3/2015 1:10:00 PM

Hope, truth, fantasy and innocence lay silently within such words as these, waiting to be released by the magic of a poet's dream. Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 6/1/2015 1:40:00 PM

Eileen, love the new username, and your cloud poem is delightful and thanks for visiting my poem, shameonyou

Constance La France
Date: 6/1/2015 4:06:00 PM

I like it ... sort of mysterious and the pic is lovely too!!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2015 2:41:00 PM

Oh...thanks, Constance. I'm not sure if I will keep it or not. I love the name Roya. It means "vision" in my language. Your poet is superb. It was my pleasure to read it. Hugs

Shane Cooper

Date: 5/31/2015 9:52:00 PM

A lovely poem, if you lay down and gaze skyward look long enough you can see your dreams take shape in the clouds as they drift past. Such Ephemeral dreams.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2015 2:40:00 PM

What a sweet post, Shane. You are a romantic at heart. Lovely! Thanks for the delightful visit. Hugs

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/31/2015 7:29:00 PM

Eileen this is such a beautiful poem, sometimes I can be on cloud nine, by the way the avatar was 50 years ago next month, seems like a lifetime away now, take care..............Vera............

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2015 2:40:00 PM

Lovely, dear. It's so lovely that your love has lasted all these years. Thank you for your kind and gracious visit, Vera. Hugs

Joseph May

Date: 5/31/2015 6:46:00 AM

Your cloud seems fine it must be cloud nine....beautiful write

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2015 7:45:00 AM

Cloud nine is the best place to be, Joseph. :) Thanks for the visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2015 12:37:00 PM

Indeed a different take. Lovely picture you got going with it too!! I likes it!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2015 5:46:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie. That's Katie Perry.... She's done a cloud song, apparently. :) Hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/30/2015 12:15:00 PM

You just hang on up there my little Desert Orchid, while I get my chopper out and come and join you lol. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2015 5:47:00 AM

Why Mr Seal....everyone knows that clouds are wispy and dreamy, ethereal and very delicate....I'm afraid the whir of your...chopper....might make the cloud thin out and I will simply fall through....Perhaps try getting to me in a hot air balloon. Thanks for the visit.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/30/2015 11:31:00 AM

I like the softer side of the cloud Eileen...I prefer not to slam anyone.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2015 5:50:00 AM

Yes, Tim. I can see that. :) Thanks for the lovely visit. Hugs