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German Windmills

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Nurembered days Numb Dumb The pain insane a breast to suckle an ear to hear walking dead late but prayed Gods fell asleep Mortals played tumors grow Its the doctors show Liver or die Drink my dreams or do I try Lettuce and rabbits seduction and undergarments exposed in the rain dancing in pain rendezvous cafes and empty tables candles burnt loves description like flames fades away easy to say no one to sway who the hell wants to stay This world is red This life is spoked and bloody Emotions drowned in daily strife Memories drift like snow in the wind Silent dreams Erotic dancers Colombian cafes My head a daze Long ago, when the piano was tuned I was a player I was formidable and great now I drink in the last call fulk the life and I want the hell do I cry in Belgium Fabulous I am not a nice guy But the metro is here so goodbye Suicide tracks and Musical notes chasing the hate of isis tears for fears Butterflies trump ruby foo’s buffet for tyrants rant While fools become gluttons

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Funom Makama

Date: 8/6/2016 11:31:00 AM

This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/5/2016 5:11:00 AM

'Nurembered' days!! Historic poem and contemporary. I love the subtle stream of consciousness. I read this many times and love the message and the connections you guide towards, which I am left to fill with my own stream. German windmills to cry about in Belgium. 'Walking dead', 'silent dreams' and erotic dancers, there is so much...

Hillard Sarver

Date: 8/4/2016 10:52:00 AM

This is a very strong and sad poem. So much in this poem it is one that will reveal new meanings with each read. So many terrific phrases; however, this one burned into my brain as, I read it,"easy to say...no one to sway...who the hell wants to stay." Thank you so much for sharing this. Well done.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2016 2:52:00 AM

An excellent write, Arthur! Deserved reading a few times. Thoughts dressed in blue....and red. // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/2/2016 8:01:00 PM

very powerful yet so sad, I hope you feel better soon. Light & love

Tim Smith

Date: 8/2/2016 3:18:00 PM

A ride on the undercarriage of life...well weaved

Tom Quigley

Date: 8/2/2016 2:48:00 PM

Dizzying, sad, and lonely. Great write.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/2/2016 7:51:00 AM

you have left me inspired and speechless, i love this windmill of thoughts chopping through the wind of your write, it all turns together, thoughts and feelings, deeper meanings. I love it sugar x

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/2/2016 1:44:00 AM

Topical musings, relevant fears, who's listening now? Well done for who...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2016 12:24:00 AM

Reminded me of the windmills of your mind Arthur. It isn't that pain in the world has increased that much it that we have faster better coverage of it. Words to ponder in this write. ; )

Seren Roberts

Date: 8/1/2016 10:19:00 PM

so sad, experienced by many i would imagine.....Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/7/2016 6:44:00 PM

Thank you! :)