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Gentle Summer Rain

the summer rain falls down, gently kissing multihued flowers that sway to the tune of the rain...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/26/2010 6:07:00 PM
i love the feeling ands the image here my friend
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Date: 11/23/2010 12:42:00 AM
Good morning Wilma, I think! Well it is 2:30 am here. lol, the time i wake,up ! and al my family is asleep. Enjoyed your little Kimo poem. By the way i thought it was cold on h other side ofthe pond,, Still lve he poem,,, Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/23/2010 12:29:00 AM
Delightfully written in a new form to me... Well done and thanks for enlightening, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:51:00 AM
Hello Wilma, Thank you for visiting me and all your kind comments. This is so lovely, I can imagine all that is written here. As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/22/2010 6:15:00 AM
what I would give to be a flower during that summer rain, missy ;) you sure make it sound so divine ;)-- way to go with this I have yet to try out this form :) hugs nikko :)
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:52:00 PM
Wilma, just want to say thanks for your words of encouragement and hope your weekend is going well too. This poem of yours reminds me so much of while growing up, we would get up in the mornings while it was mango season and run outside to find the mangoes that had fallen off during the night and was lying there in the tall grass, covered with the nights dew or the soft falling summer's rain. O, I long for those days, when there was not much care at all. Love and blessings Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:19:00 PM
Ahhh this is so beautiful and relaxing too! I love the rain!
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:57:00 PM
a soothing and beautiful write,..p.d.
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:57:00 AM
A lovely and wonderful serene image your words picture Wilma. What a soothing scene it would be, beautiful Kimo >> James :)
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:37:00 AM
i sing with this, wilma!! just wow.. thanks for the cheers on my hip hopping blues! mush appreciated!warmest, nette
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:07:00 AM
Pretty pretty pretty!!
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:57:00 AM
I don’t know why but I had a Japanese feeling wash over me as I read this, all paper walls rain on t bamboo roof and origami ornaments. Lovely thank you.
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:31:00 AM
Lovely picture of the rain falling with multihued flowers swaying, Wilma
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:23:00 AM
May I dance with these flowers, Wilma? What a lovely use of the kimo form! Well done, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:07:00 AM
Feels like I want to go dancing there again. Thanks for being a good friend and a great poet, because you inspire me so often.
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:24:00 AM
Oh, a reminder of summer and the flowers without the cold..I am glad that I stopped by to read this one..Your kind comments on my work about HD lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:16:00 AM
Nice picture, that warms up this chilly Nov. day here in NY... Still thinking of that Nurse..lol lovely write my dear...love Michael
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