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Genesis

The want of love’s the muse that moves my heart
and generates the verse that grows within,
an unrequited flame that does impart
sweet sentiments that flow into my pen.

9/1/20

from the poem:  A Muse Called Love
for Rithimus Divisa 5 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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John Hamilton Date: 9/21/2020 7:32:00 AM Another worthy winner Janis well done! Login to Reply

Sigrid Ermine Date: 9/20/2020 9:41:00 PM Janis, - A Muse Called Love is an intriguing write. Splendid meter, I pick up melancholy in a growth dimension. Congratulations on your well earned Top Win!! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/20/2020 5:35:00 PM Beautiful title and following lines! A tribute to your muse-infused pen! Congratulations, Janis! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 9/20/2020 3:28:00 PM Absolutely amazing! Many congratulations on your top notch win, Janis ~Elaine Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2020 2:20:00 PM this is what speaks to all poets! What a great entry and win in Greg's contest. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/20/2020 10:38:00 AM Oh yes,, the muse that moves. Lovely, Janis. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 9/20/2020 8:56:00 AM You do have a very loving muse, Janis! Congratulations on your second place win! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/20/2020 4:13:00 AM Beautiful, Janis. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish ~ Login to Reply

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 9/20/2020 2:14:00 AM This stood alone at the second spot, Janis, and is just so effortless to roll off the tongue, and it does so with beauty and grace and the expression of joy and connection that we all feel as writers ... really LOVED this piece, and I am STUNNED that there are not comments before mine ... you must have the same affliction I do these days, lol. Blessings and thanks for entering, Dear Poet! :o) <3 Login to Reply