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General Motivation Poem

Girl, you shouldnt be sad and frown Life has many ups and downs You should be the one to own the difficult times and not be torn You used to always smile now i wonder what happened to you in a while You should be strong and fight then only you can achieve the light You should be stronger and brave Dont give up till you reach the brigtht side of the cave There are miracles in life left for you to achieve You shouldn't run away from them and leave You're born to lead and conquer the world You'll shine like gold If you're courageous and bold yeah

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Date: 5/14/2016 12:44:00 PM
jyothika bala, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/14/2016 8:41:00 AM
Powerful and encouraging, Jyothika,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jyothika Bala
Date: 5/14/2016 1:08:00 PM
thanks. even i'm lucky to have you LINDA. I've seen your poems. they're awesome! great job!!

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