Anil Deo Poet Concrete

Gems

Eyes at NighT
s e a  r  c  H  I      n    g
discerning
churning beauty from darkness

Eyes at ResT
s s o o o t h i n g g g
rejuvenating
fluttering between fascination and frightful vision

Eyes at LighT
d  I S  t    R a C  t  e      D   
contracted
battered between beautified bodies and butterflies

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Lisa Ricci April 21, 2017 at 7:12 AM Anil Anil Anil. This is more than marvelous. I love it. Gems is right. You were the poet here and the artist. We readers see attention to detail. This was well thought out. Night searching Eyes soothing Light distracted. How true. Wonderful work in its entirety. Have a great day.

Paul Callus April 21, 2017 at 5:11 AM A cleverly built trilogy of 'eyes'... #7 Regards // paul

Sunlite Wanter April 19, 2017 at 6:00 PM I've never seen anything like this, Anil. i'm fascinated.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 19, 2017 at 4:24 AM - Anil, a unique and ideal poems - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 18, 2017 at 3:45 PM Anil, this is very cleverly done and I love how the visual effects match each stanza's thought. A 7:) Amitiés

Emile Pinet April 18, 2017 at 2:25 PM You have managed to capture human frailties and emotions and weave them into a poem that is easy to relate to and understand. Emile.

Demetrios Trifiatis April 18, 2017 at 10:39 AM Real gems your verses my friend, Anil! Deserve a 7!