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Eyes at NighT s e a r c H I n g discerning churning beauty from darkness Eyes at ResT s s o o o t h i n g g g rejuvenating fluttering between fascination and frightful vision Eyes at LighT d I S t R a C t e D contracted battered between beautified bodies and butterflies

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Date: 4/21/2017 7:12:00 AM
Anil Anil Anil. This is more than marvelous. I love it. Gems is right. You were the poet here and the artist. We readers see attention to detail. This was well thought out. Night searching Eyes soothing Light distracted. How true. Wonderful work in its entirety. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/21/2017 5:11:00 AM
A cleverly built trilogy of 'eyes'... #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 4/19/2017 6:00:00 PM
I've never seen anything like this, Anil. i'm fascinated.
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Date: 4/19/2017 4:24:00 AM
- Anil, a unique and ideal poems - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2017 3:45:00 PM
Anil, this is very cleverly done and I love how the visual effects match each stanza's thought. A 7:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/18/2017 2:25:00 PM
You have managed to capture human frailties and emotions and weave them into a poem that is easy to relate to and understand. Emile.
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Date: 4/18/2017 10:39:00 AM
Real gems your verses my friend, Anil! Deserve a 7!
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