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26 June 2024

"We are all petals of imperfections sharing the same sun" - Silent One Here in this Gemini garden~ we are all precious petals~ naive and gentle wild and free midst freshly broken morn We sing as silvery silence embraces June's warmest night; We dance at the first kiss of sunlight on our pallid skin transforming hues from day to day. Alas, we dwell~ on idyllic but ephemeral setting, We are endowed with vibrant colours ~ only to fade away on moonless eve We wilt and dry~ We're bound to die in few golden sigh Our petals are canvas of unfinished masterpieces waiting for an artist in this Gemini garden where Silent One whispers eternity.

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Date: 12/19/2024 7:03:00 PM
Dear Jcb, your poem entwines the cycles of Nature and the human experience of life so beautifully. The transience of existence is illuminated through your wonderful use of rich, tender, bittersweet imagery and metaphors. Your stunning verse captures the spirit of SO's verse perfectly. Congratulations for your success in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/23/2024 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I enjoyed reading this work that you penned. Sara K
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Date: 8/6/2024 8:28:00 PM
you bring such mystical feel in my heart with this remarkable piece...sending huge congrats on your way, jcb!
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Date: 7/3/2024 1:15:00 PM
A really beautiful poem, you Gemini garden sounds awesome.... Love that last stanza.. Thanks for writing and congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 7/2/2024 9:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Yes, we are all petals of imperfections. Yet if we stay together, we become colorful flowers of priceless worth. The last line is a great compliment to Silent One, our great poet friend. Congratulations dear friend, Jez on your first place win.
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Date: 7/2/2024 8:26:00 PM
WOW ! Big Congrats to win. Last stanza is most impressive. Blessings. Have Good Days.
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Date: 7/2/2024 5:37:00 PM
The last stanza compliments SO brilliantly, love the lines including all poets. Congratulations on your top win Jcb!
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Date: 7/2/2024 2:23:00 PM
Lovely poetry JcB, congratulations on your win in Ink’s contest… Beryl
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Date: 7/2/2024 9:28:00 AM
Congrats, JCB! Very nice!
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Date: 7/2/2024 9:05:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Great last 6 lines....  Have a great day writing away...............
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Date: 7/2/2024 8:27:00 AM
So lovely! Congrats on your well deserved placement
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Date: 7/2/2024 7:14:00 AM
“ where silent one whispers eternity” that line really won me over! Beautiful! And so evocative and your words flow just seamlessly in a very fitting manner for the quote youv used too! I love how youv started too, we are all indeed, precious in our own way, in our garden, although we sometimes dwell on idyllic yet ephemeral colors! So true! Pleasure reading your use of the quote and seeing you join in for the celebration! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Thank you
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Date: 6/26/2024 8:10:00 AM
What a wonderful write for Silent One. Have a great day writing away...............
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