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Gemini ( Male.)

All my friends say they can not abide
these two people I have deep inside
Let the first one insist,
feel the other resist
while I wait for their war to subside.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2010 12:50:00 PM

Many congratulations Gerard on your win in pd's contest with this kool Limerick >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/27/2010 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Gerard in P. D.'S contest "Zodiac Race" Love,Carol

Skat A

Date: 9/26/2010 7:27:00 PM

GERARD, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN A JoB WELL DoNE, ENJoYED YoUR ENTRY 4 P.D's ZoDIAC CoNTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/26/2010 9:56:00 AM

good one, congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/26/2010 5:05:00 AM

Congratulations on thyis fine win in the contest, Gerard

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/26/2010 4:24:00 AM

oh the tug of war of the twins indeed!! This was a fun limerick-- congrats on your win, Gerard :)-- nikko :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/26/2010 1:45:00 AM

GERARD, Congratulations!! Thanks for a job well done, enjoyed your entry. Had fun reading,,lol,, I could have skipped the judging part, well some one had to. Glad you where among my winners,..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/25/2010 11:53:00 PM

Congrats Gerard, hope the twins don't get into a fight about who actually won the contest ;) enjoy your weekend! wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2010 11:21:00 PM

Congratulations, Gerard, you twinsy guy!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 10:37:00 PM

Congrats Gerard on your win in P.D.'s contest with this awesome piece on the Gemini Male..the only thing to offset him is the Gemini female..ME..haha.. enjoyed your write luv.. enjoy your sweet success on this happy Sunday with luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/20/2010 7:37:00 AM

I've known a few Geminis, and agree, the twins are opposites indeed. However, as far as I know, you are doing just fine. Enjoyed this Limerick, Gerard. Peace, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2010 2:41:00 PM

Interesting facts about Gemini..Good luck if entry into the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Also, for the encouraging words for our son...Thanks for pointing out my mistake in my poem ...I will have to look at it again and see what I did..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/27/2010 2:01:00 PM

Very clever, Gerard. My sister is a Gemini and I swear she has two people fighting within for control. She goes from sweet and loving to critical and harsh quite quickly. I've never seen the dark side of you, my friend. A great entry for the astrology contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2010 10:30:00 PM

Very good one about GEmini, Gerard and thanks so much for commenting on my blog.OUv, Andrea

Nate D.

Date: 8/26/2010 9:45:00 PM

well donr for the zodiac contest, nice Limerick"